REGRET OF MY LIFE
Ahnaf Khan

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Synopsis

A short fictional love story which will give the readers a view of the importance of life and decision making.

One day, that’s all it takes to turn your life around, just one day, that one day for me was Friday when I broke up with the lady of my dreams.... I had relationship with her for 4 years but today I have broken up...lots of things happened in those years, but today I saw her for the last time when I left , I hugged her, she totally ignored me, she was annoyed, she didn’t even replied a word to me, she overlooked me, I tried my best but I failed and left the place, when I saw her standing in the window...she was avoiding making an eye contact with me, but I was continuously looking into her eyes, her eyes were filled with tears... pain, love, guilt and anger, All was visible in her eyes.... it was me who was at fault, it was me who broke up with her.

Maybe there would be more worst things in her future she has to face it alone...unfortunately I will be not there with her.... I love her so much... I already started missing her... maybe she will curse me. But it was meant to be done. The angel of my life... has just flown away....she gave me blessings, gave me a new life, and gave me lessons on how to live.... unfortunately I am now all alone...

Who was she? How she changed me? What happened between us? A long story...

Story of my life... story of love...story filled with happiness and love... story of my mistakes. Regret of my life.

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radhika

Awesome nd quite fresh story..Looking forward 2 read further

May 28 '15
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Deepak Kaul

I did not want to read further after the first para. Terrible way to start a story / novel.

Mar 06 '15
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pandustar

The problem with people these days is that they want a book written in perfect English. It is quite OK to use a mix of English, Hindi or any other language to communicate the story. This is what I see in this book - although let me warn you that publishers will be hesitant to publish such a book as they are mostly not risk takers
That being said - be yourself which you have. The characters are very likeable. Grammar and basic writing needs to be worked upon - but then what are editors for?
All the best.

Jan 29 '15
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Aviral Singh

the dots after sentences, leaving them unfinished is a really annoying. The writing style seems to be under discovery. Please do not write half and let half of it stay in your imagination, remember the reader has ti imagine through your narrative and not through your unexpressed imagination. Had it been written patiently with complete sentences, it would have made much more sense.I suggest rewriting.

Jan 19 '15
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Rajshree Chauhan

Felt like the story was written in haste, the language was a barrier. I couldn't connect with the characters, none of them. It reminded me of what I had written when I first started writing, I'm not trying to be any kind of inspiration here, just know that the only way you're going to get better at it is if you keep trying. Give the story some thought, the characters some definition, the story some content and work on the language, simple English which is grammatically correct would do. All the best!

Jan 16 '15
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Ahnaf Khan

Thank you so much for the advice. :)

Jan 16 '15
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Hammad Wassan

The story was interesting and relatable. i am keen to know about the regret of his life and looking forward for the complete story.It just need a little polishing but a nice work from author.

Jan 16 '15
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zarrine

Great nd exciting....expecting alot more to happen.

Jan 15 '15
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Shruti Rana

appreciate the work done by author. Looking forward to know what will happen in the end. Will arslaan marry sanjida or what will be the regret of his life ?

Jan 15 '15
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Shilpa Gupta

Good story concept till now. And its quite impressive that in such a young age the author has done a magnificent job. My all good wishes are with you. Waiting to know what happens next.

Jan 15 '15
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Sheetal Phadtare

Great story...eagerly waiting to know the further story. Good work Mr. Author. All the best. :)

Jan 15 '15
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Nikhat Mahmood

The author is young and so is his story. Actually there are stories all around us but the ability to pick them and create a fiction is called creativity and the author has that creativity. Some elements in grammar and language needs to be worked on otherwise the story is grasping, I would surely like to read on.

Jan 15 '15
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ayesha merchant

The book is very good for the youngsters but it could have been better if the author focused on the language that is used. Overall I really liked the book and I'm eager to know what's the regret of his life.

Jan 14 '15
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Aavez Pathan

Excellent

Jan 14 '15
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Qazi Mohammed Salman

Nice story with the a bit of special phase of the young adults in that age though it needs some polishing. Overall nice try bro next time try harder

Jan 14 '15
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Ahnaf Khan

Thanks bro

Jan 14 '15
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saumya Chirakkal

wow!! it was nice till now and want to read more and i'm quite impatient to know what was the regret of his life...looking forward to it. :)

Jan 14 '15
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Ahnaf Khan

sure :)

Jan 14 '15
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Jan 14 '15
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Imroze Pathan

The Story is short and simple. The writer has done a commendable job but needs a little refinement in a few aspects,which will definitely improve with experience in future books . All in all a very good story , considering the writer's maiden book, it is a job which deserves an applaud! Way to go AK. Looking forward to more interesting stories

Jan 14 '15
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Faraaz Kazi

Great insight on teenage love and friendship. Nicely done. Must read for all teenagers indeed.

Jan 14 '15
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Ghazala

I liked it till now.... Needs work, waiting for next chapters

Jan 14 '15
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Maaz Kazi

its a Good read. short & crisp

Jan 14 '15
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waqarkhanpathan

It is a story which every teenage will be connected and even the elders who have lived their teenage like king size.Great work by the author keep it up !!!!

Jan 14 '15
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Sahil khan

It's a good book. I really liked the concept but i think the English used in it could've been better, just saying. :)

Jan 14 '15
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Ahnaf Khan

Surely will start working on improving it.

Jan 14 '15
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Atif Kazi

A very intresting book... With simple language and a story that touches your heart..with gripping story that keeps u glued. Awesome!! The language is simple to understand with a gripping story

Jan 14 '15
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Ahnaf Khan

thanks :)

Jan 14 '15
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Arbaz Khan

What a unique story and a real time interesting line up good going keep writing All the very best

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About the author

Ahnaf Khan Follow

Student, persuading MBA in marketing at present. The only Aim of life is to connect the Dots efficiently and be Successful in whatever i do. Passionate about writing stories related to real life which inspires others.