Karma isn't such a bitch!
Rashmi Rathi

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Synopsis

He is a post-graduate from IIT and IIM, has an envious life; great parents, a supportive family, a lovely wife, a renewable energy startup which is already very successful and growing at a fast pace. He has everything that a person could wish for from life. Until one day, an Income Tax raid on his company triggers a sequence of fatal events that brings his almost fairy tale like life crashing down.

Desperately looking for an answer to his plight, a pre-destined but eventful encounter with Shiv Nath (Baba) at Pachmarhi, provides Krish with not only an answer to his plight but, sets him on a life altering course; equipped with the knowledge of a science that is as ancient as life on earth itself and technique that will help ground his restless mind.

Embark on this journey with Krish and equip yourself with the knowledge of this simple law or science that can help you also to lead a fulfilling life.

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Jan 25 '16
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Feb 02 '16
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Jan 22 '16
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Feb 02 '16
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Jan 21 '16
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Rashmi Rathi

Now that's a wonderful review. Thanks for sparing time to read and rate. But, I wish the feedback was more decipherable. :) If you want to post a feedback (but were unable to do so)....do write it here as a comment.

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Jan 11 '16
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Jan 12 '16
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Dishank Shah

Loved it!

Jan 03 '16
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Jan 06 '16
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Mahendra

Good reading. Enjoyed the journey so far. Wish to read further.

Dec 28 '15
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Dec 29 '15
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Aditya

Dear Author,
Read the available content. The Contents are interesting and calls for further reading. Please send the full book if possible.

Dec 19 '15
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Dec 29 '15
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Manoj

Excellent

Dec 12 '15
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Dec 29 '15
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Spidy Hd

good story line ..

Dec 05 '15
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Dec 07 '15
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Geetha Krishnan

Very well written, smooth flow of words, a compelling read which held my interest to the last. Would certainly like to read more

Dec 04 '15
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Dec 07 '15
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Sundari Venkatraman

I was intrigued by the synopsis. This book sounds quite different from usual. I was curious to read more. But I wish the author had "shown" the scenes unfold instead of narrating everything. It's like listening to someone tell a story instead of it all happening out there. Needs a lot of re-working.

Dec 01 '15
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Nov 24 '15
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anuj

not very close to reality.. topic is very good and fiction is the right way to explain the wisdom... i wish it could relate to common man reality for people to get connected, and forced to be changed for good. good luck

Nov 18 '15
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Nov 19 '15
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Anjali Laddha

name itself is very interesting waiting to read it.......

Nov 13 '15
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Nov 19 '15
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Komal. Loya

Interesting book. The characters are well portrayed. Sometimes the turn of events gets a bit predictable though. The language could be slightly improved. Other than that its overall a good book and definitely worth a read and should be published.

Nov 13 '15
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Nov 19 '15
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Umesh

The prologue and the initial three chapters are capable of creating necessary curiosity to read further. It also promises to provide a gripping plot and inspiring conclusion to the reader.

Nov 13 '15
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Nov 19 '15
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Kalyani

Nice concept.
But I felt that character development and a general sense of story build-up is missing. Of course, you want to quickly get down to the real story of what happens to Krish after the meltdown, but the time devoted to defining Krish as a person will help your readers identify with, empathise and sympathise with a protagonist who, as the prologue informs us, is soon about to commit suicide despite having lived an easy life.
Language and other narrative elements too need some polish

Nov 13 '15
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Nov 09 '15
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Nov 19 '15
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Ruchi Singh

I am curious to know what happens, but the narration has to be worked on. The start is rushed-up with too much prose and information. I am unable to connect with the protagonist. The plot execution doesn't invoke any empathy for the main character.

Nov 09 '15
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Nov 07 '15
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Satya

Its quite interesting. I would like to continue reading.

Nov 05 '15
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Nov 07 '15
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boka

The story does not sound real life one, it sound much filmy. But, the topic is good. There needs to be some changes at some places. to be frank, reading it felt that the book is written by a first timer. The skeleton of the story is good, but the flow is not sound, as I said earlier, it sounds filmy. Also, I doubt if the concept of karma for the story revolving around it is solid. Would like to talk with the author to explain how to tweak the story to make it sound great!

Nov 04 '15
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Nov 04 '15
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Amit Daga

Twists and interesting turns in three short chapters.... combining the various faces of myth.. interesting

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Ramsat

4 stars.
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Nov 03 '15
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Vandana sasidharan

Fantastic! Can't wait to read the whole book...

Nov 03 '15
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Nov 03 '15
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Diksha Maheshwari

Different title and concept...waiting to read more😊👍

Nov 03 '15
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Nov 03 '15
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CA Abhishek Sarda

Good attempt bhabhi will read the full book surely.

Nov 02 '15
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Nov 03 '15
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Tanmay Palsule

The story has heightened my interest. I would love to know what happened to Krish next. Linguistically though the prologue seems better than the chapters. When the book is published I would want the author to add fleshy chapters about the main characters before proceeding to the story.....so that I should empathize enough with Krish & hate Rishabh dearly which isnt the case right now.

Nov 02 '15
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Hd

Interesting and would definitely like to read the full book

Nov 01 '15
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Nov 01 '15
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Roshan

Good start. Gripping storyline. The character of Krish is developing pretty well. Very eager to read further as to where his inner voice is taking him away from the turmoil, and mess that he has landed into. :)

Oct 30 '15
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Oct 30 '15
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Kanwar Vikrant

Nice work Rashmi,Plot and character was created well.Flawless flow of the story.I hope Krish(and many others in leadership role) must read my book "OFFICERS LEADERS LIKE QUALITIES"to avoid future Gulling.

Oct 29 '15
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Rashmi Rathi

Thank you for sparing time to read and post your valuable comments. Will surely have a look at your book!

Oct 30 '15
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Babita Vij

Good read.

Oct 28 '15
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Oct 30 '15
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Varun Prabhu

A lot of tell and less of show. Even though I attest that show vs tell is a hyped concept, I look for a balance. This manuscript needs a second look. However, the story seems interesting. Keep on writing. The prose is good.

Oct 18 '15
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Oct 28 '15
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Gourav Chaudhary

Overall this is a nice read, good transition. The structure could be improved and the sentences could be made shorter. Some improvements will make this manuscript a good novel.

Oct 18 '15
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Oct 28 '15
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prabhaag

Looks interesting. Looking forward to know why Karma isn't such a bitch. Keep it up

Oct 15 '15
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Oct 15 '15
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Aviral Singh

A good attempt. All the best..!!

Oct 10 '15
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Oct 15 '15
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laddha.priyanka0911@gmail.com

The title and the cover are pretty interesting.And the first 3 chapters were racy. It has ended on a pretty intriguing note. I hope further chapters will be equally interesting and will justify the title.

Oct 08 '15
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Oct 15 '15
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reema tripathy

Good job!!! I think the author is making an attempt to connect spirituality with everyday living. However there are certain inconsistencies that need to be tajken care of:
a) IT guys will NEVER allow one of the owners to go out while investigation is on. He might try to flee or tamper with evidence elsewhere.
b) These people don't seem to be middle class people. In that case, they need to borrow or get a private equity investor get them the money. Whatever the case, they need to give regular updates to banks. One person individually cannot hoodwink the entire system; it has to be a cohort
- Grammatical errors need to be taken care of. Write short sentences and as far as possible avoid the repetition of adjectives.

Waiting to read further ..the theme s very interesting. Keep going

Oct 06 '15
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Oct 06 '15
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Shriesh Pabba

Please bear in that this is only one person's opinion:

My review - summary:
Would definitely love to keep reading; would also spend money to buy the book if it were to be refined.

My likes:
Krish's character is developing very strongly and I want to know what's going on.
You have intrigued me with the character of Rishabh and definitely would like to get some answers.
I get a sense of a grand theme that you are building up to and I want to know what it is.

My Dislikes:
Language needs refinement - tense-switching, punctuation here and there, character thoughts.
I am being told a lot of things; would like to see some of them.
Plot coherence is a bit off in a place or two -- e.g. early on we read about a character who has not been introduced; then beginning of chapter 3 - it is written that his anguished "engulfed" him, which is what was happening earlier too, so wasn't sure what was happening earlier or at the beginning of chapter 3.

My review:
A hidden grand theme and developing characters have definitely grabbed my attention and I would love to read more. I can't be sure if the grand theme is to my liking though.
Despite my likes, there are some troubling irritants which might not make me spend my money. Primarily, it is the grip over the language and polishing of your story-telling prowess (note: polishing; you are pretty good as it is).

Oct 03 '15
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Shriesh Pabba

I am not a great writer or even a published writer; keep that in mind when you peruse my thoughts on your writing.

I won't go into detailed constructive criticism because I don't think that this site is for that. Here are a couple of points to consider:
1. Prologue (or Epilogue) is additional information -- something that "adds" onto the story; generally, it is not something that "joins" the story. They way you used prologue is considered bad story-telling. Hooking readers by showing a point in the story as a prologue implies that you are not confident of what is coming before that prologue. So, maybe you start the story at the prologue itself!
2. You showed glee, frustration and angst pretty well, but the astonishment towards the end of chapter three did not come out well.
3. Towards the end, Krish is going to a cave-like place (if I remember correctly). Now, I am not sure if he really was going or if it was dream-like.

There are a number of published books out there that pale in comparison to your writing. So, I would think that your story-telling needs polishing.

Not sure if you have heard of this writing community -- scribophile.com. It is an amazing place for a wannabe writer. But I'll have to warn you that if you haven't been used to regular criticism on your writing, that site might haunt your imagination.

Oct 03 '15
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Rashmi Rathi

Thanks for sparing time to read and providing your feedback. So far this is the most detailed feedback I have received and really appreciate your thoughts on it. To answer some of your queries, what you started with was the Prologue. Then Chpater 1, 2 and part of chapter 3 is flashback...somewhere in chapter 3 the prologue catches on and then we move further ahead with Krish's story. But, what I couldn't figure out is the polishing bit. You found that off the mark and then you are saying (note: polishing; you are pretty good as it is) so, now i am actually confused about it ?? is it really that off mark or it is somewhat bang on and will do with some polishing?

Oct 03 '15
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sushil mangla

As of now its keeping the reader with the book, good work

Oct 03 '15
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Oct 03 '15
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Garima

Totally engulfed into the story line. Would like to know further about destiny of Krish....Looking forward to the book !

Oct 01 '15
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Oct 01 '15
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Yogesh Goswami

Spellbound! Totally engrossing. Can't wait to get hold on the entire book.

Sep 29 '15
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Sep 30 '15
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Geet Bhandari

Nyc short story based on how to deal wid our lyf... we shld nevr lose hope in any situation...

Sep 28 '15
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Sep 28 '15
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Sunita Chadha

The story line is interesting and the reader is compelled to read on to find out what happens next.

Sep 27 '15
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Sep 28 '15
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Priya Sidharth Sethi

The subject looks interesting, however there is more 'telling' than 'showing'. Would have loved to read the journey of Krish instead of jumps from his marriage to separation to suicide. Though I am looking forward to read forward.

Sep 23 '15
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Sep 23 '15
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Asha Kaurani

Different and nice story...!! Will be waiting to read further....

Sep 21 '15
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Sep 23 '15
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Vineet Saxena

Interesting...would like to read the complete book..

Sep 21 '15
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Sep 21 '15
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Vivek Bhatia

Quite interesting & gripping and very well written.
I would definitely like to read further.

Sep 20 '15
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Sep 21 '15
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amit

Interesting story!!! Dying hard to read further story.............

Sep 19 '15
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Sep 21 '15
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Vineet

Seems to be interesting!

Sep 19 '15
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Sep 21 '15
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Ankit Lahoti

Interesting Chapters. Would like to read the complete book.

Sep 19 '15
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Sep 21 '15
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Surya Kote

my take on the 3 chapters ....... gripping,engrossing,a mystery & suspense novel's style of racy narrative....crisply edited, a lot is narrated in very few words ....... the 3 chapters ended before I realised and was eager to know what was to happen next ......

Sep 18 '15
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Sep 18 '15
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Sunny Hooda

So far, its looking interesting... Good write up but everything so fast gives goose bumps. Anyways, all the best... Time for shine & sparkles ahead. Good luck.

Sep 18 '15
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Sep 18 '15
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Chandraranjan Gaur

जो कुछ आगे कह्ना है, उस हेतु आरंभ अच्छा ही है !
परंतु आगे क्या कहा जायेगा,वो ही महत्वपूर्ण होगा !

Sep 17 '15
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Rashmi Rathi

Shukriya!

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Sep 18 '15
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Uday Pal Singh

Nice presentation and good to see the author touching the issues faced by the current generation.

Sep 15 '15
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Sep 16 '15
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satish

very good work

Sep 15 '15
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Sep 16 '15
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Wave Rider

Lacks continuity....IIT to IIM and all of a sudden IT raid....Gap needs to be filled.
It also needs to be edited by a pro...who can find better choice of words for IMPACT.

Overall, three chapters were interesting...but the being unable to read the entire book......has an element of suspense

Sep 13 '15
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Rashmi Rathi

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Sep 13 '15
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Ramesh

Interesting storyline!

Sep 13 '15
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Sep 13 '15
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Sanjay Raghuvanshi

Interesting --- like friendship,work & dhokha----

Sep 12 '15
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Sep 12 '15
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Kirt

It is very intresting I am very curious what happened ahead

Sep 11 '15
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Sep 11 '15
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Deepak Jain

very hard to comment after a very brief reading, but this one doesn't look very different from all the other english novels we are getting to read nowadays.
the focus seems to be totally on upscale and upper middle class and mostly all are from iit,iim or some other highly placed institution. and thats what worries me...
nearly 80 % of our populus dont get this ( i am one among them , so maybe its the frustration speaking), but still the atory does have a promising start and gets to you ,waiting for the full read...

Sep 11 '15
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Sep 11 '15
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6ton

Quite promising for a first time author! The story needs to slow down though - but I guess its just a back story, and I would expect the remaining part of the book to be more relaxed.
It would be great if the story also covered Krish's personal life - his friendships with his partners, his family.

Sep 11 '15
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Rashmi Rathi

Thank you for sparing time to read and your feedback.....all the aspects will unfold....gradually.....one chapter at a time.

Sep 11 '15
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Sharma Gajendra

Whets the appetite........hooks one enough to want at least one full read..could have been more polished but not a deal breaker.....cliched at couple of places (why successful means only IIT/IIM grads?) but one does want to know why Karma isn't sach a bitch :)

Sep 10 '15
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Rashmi Rathi

Lols.....he may have succeeded at IIT/IIM and the start-up. But, life is a bigger exam and it treats everyone equally irrespective of whether from IIM/IIT/CA/MS from USA. So, in that way Krish did fail....he is not all that successful also.....Thank you Sharmaji for sparing time and reading and providing your valuable feedback. Karma isn't such a bitch...that you will surely figure out once you get to read the full book. :)

Sep 11 '15
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Rkrk Rkrk

thx

Sep 10 '15
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Rashmi Rathi

RKRK---Well thank you......whoever is the mystery reader, for sparing time and your feedback.

Sep 11 '15
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Share Traders

Nice to read here, I would be able to put comments only after full reading.

Sep 10 '15
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Sep 10 '15
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Hetika Sanghani

simple language...interesting read... u realize that the book is racy as it has a different story to tell so doesn't want to discuss the downfall in grave detail... the book has ended on a very intriguing note...definitely want to read further...

Sep 10 '15
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Rashmi Rathi

Thank you for taking time out for reading and giving your feedback! I am actually glad that someone at least figured out that "it has a different story to tell so doesn't want to discuss the downfall in grave detail." So glad! :)

Sep 10 '15
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meena rai

congrats well written and very well described .glad to know girls can also write so good .

Sep 10 '15
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Rashmi Rathi

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Sep 10 '15
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Amit

Good story, but i have two issues, first is story is predictable and everything happens very fast. Second one is that story fails to creat picture of what actually is happening.. Else everything is good,

Sep 10 '15
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Rashmi Rathi

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Sep 10 '15
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suresh

very well written .can't wait to read the full story

Sep 09 '15
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Rashmi Rathi

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Sep 10 '15
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Sandeep Arora

Good thought provoking start , looking forward to the next chapters.

Sep 09 '15
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Rashmi Rathi

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Sep 08 '15
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Rashmi Rathi

Thanks!!

Sep 09 '15
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Keen ToLearn

Ah finally am able to review the book. Loved it Rashmi. Gripping. But a few queries. Are these the first three chapters ? So much is happening within the first few pages. I wish it was taken slower. For you to take us slowly through his perfect life. So that we will also be as crestfallen as him when everything is snatched away. Having said that I assume you have a reason for making it fast. Maybe the story starts only after the fall. Looking forward to reading the rest. And all the best

Sep 08 '15
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Rashmi Rathi

Yes these are the first 3 chapters. And as you guessed it right the story begins after the fall. People are already trying to cope with their own stress and negativity in life. My intention is to not linger on the negative aspects but let people experience the soothing positive aspects so the pace slows down after the first 3 chapters and you will be taken on an entirely new journey from there on. Thanks for taking time out and reading. Appreciate your feedback.

Sep 08 '15
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Rashmi Rathi

Thank You!!

Sep 08 '15
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Leena Nair

Fast paced!

Sep 07 '15
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Sep 13 '15
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pandustar

Everything is just perfect. Perfect size of the chapters, perfect intrigue, perfect characterization. Hope that this manuscript gets published - if it doesn't then its a real shame.

Sep 07 '15
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Rashmi Rathi

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Sep 07 '15
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Satish Sarda

Good Story Line

Sep 07 '15
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Rashmi Rathi

Thank you!!

Sep 07 '15
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Dinesh

The story line is interesting and in sync with today's world which is full of corruption, and conspiracy

Sep 07 '15
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Rashmi Rathi

Thank you!!

Sep 07 '15
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Chanchal

Thogh very limited reading material but is captivating...i will surely like to read this book in full...seems very seasoned writer having fantastic grasp on language and emotions

Sep 06 '15
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Rashmi Rathi

Thank You!!

Sep 06 '15
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Thara

Great work! Seemed a little fast paced, but gripping. Eagerly waiting to read the book.

Sep 06 '15
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Rashmi Rathi

Thank You!!

Sep 06 '15
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Nitin

I like the Simplicity. Interested to know what happens next. The pace is very fast. To me it seems the author wants to hit the target ASAP. Would wish the characters just don't come as surprise and there relation, reasons for togetherness will be expressed. Looking forward for the climax.

Sep 06 '15
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Rashmi Rathi

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Sep 06 '15
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Rahul

The suspense needs to open up and need to know what happened to Krish and where was he heading for in his life

Sep 06 '15
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Rashmi Rathi

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Sep 05 '15
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Rashmi Rathi

Thank you!!

Sep 05 '15
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Govind Bhagwat

Interesting title and cover design..the sample pages displayed are showing a good promise of emotions, drama & time well spent...the tagline of the book and suspense initiated in the opening/displayed pages (about the protagonist past and future) makes a reader to be in the karmic journey of the protagonist & identify with the same...should be published..

Sep 05 '15
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Rashmi Rathi

Thank you!!

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Juby

Good work. Want to read more...

Sep 05 '15
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Rashmi Rathi

Thank you!!

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Rajani

Luv it

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Rashmi Rathi

Thank You!!

Sep 05 '15
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sureshpaswan

very good

Sep 05 '15
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Rashmi Rathi

Thank You!!

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ramesh kumar

wow very nice. great work..

Sep 04 '15
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Rashmi Rathi

Thank You!!

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Rashmi Rathi

Thank You!!

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Deepak Kaul

Krish's unbelievably perfect life seems to unravel rather quickly and predictably. Before we know it, everything has blown up and he is in the wilderness contemplating suicide. I wish it had been a slower, more difficult burn to keep the reader invested, and there had been more angst and emotion around the unravelling from him and his near and dear ones. The writing however is good and flows at a decent pace.

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Rashmi Rathi

Thanks for the comments!! It's done intentionally, because once he reaches Pachmarhi the pace slows down. That is where the actual content as per the Title begins to pan out.

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Kumar Gunjan

It requires Language Editing. The narration needs to be improved.

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Rashmi Rathi

Thank You!! Will keep the recommendations in mind.

Sep 05 '15
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piyush sharda

amazing rashmi ji. wishing to read more when chapter 3 ended. great work...keep it up..

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Rashmi Rathi

Thank You!!

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Varchaswi

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Rashmi Rathi

Thanks for the rating!

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