LIONESS ON TWO FEET
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Synopsis

It is the life story of Vicky, an average student residing in Chennai. Life is rosy to him till his school days after that it becomes turbulent because he is educationally average. He is tossed like a ship caught in rough weather and sees no road to pull himself outside the labyrinth he has entered into. He does realize life eventually when everything that matters is lost forever.

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Geetha Krishnan

I understand that this is an average guy's story, but does that mean that the writing should be this bad? The author states average guys get more fun, but the reader is left to yawn. Obviously the author's idea of fun and that of the readers is quite at loggerheads. Chapters are too long, narrative is disjointed, it looks like the author has simply written whatever came into his head and did not even re read. The protagonist seems too indifferent to the reader to whom he's supposed to be talking

Dec 10 '15
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Sundari Venkatraman

Where's the fiction?
It reads like a rant. A suggestion to the writer: Please read a lot of fiction, especially popular ones to get a hang of how a story may be presented. I am not saying that the popular ones should be followed verbatim; but it will give a clue as to what the reader is looking for.

Dec 06 '15
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Lesley D. Biswas

Needs brushing up. Having said that, every author puts a lot of time into a manuscript which must be appreciated.

Dec 06 '15
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K. Bhatia

Written in a witty language, this novel keeps you hooked!

Nov 02 '15
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Deepak Kaul

The cover had potential if not for the thick black band at the bottom. And that's about it. The first para of the preface had like a million grammatical errors. That was a sufficient put off. Thankfully BGB does not have the option of rating a manuscript at zero stars or else I would have given this one the boiled egg. If this is the kind of manuscripts BGB deems fit to upload, I shudder to think in what state the rejects are submitted.

Sep 16 '15
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