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Oct 05 '16
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The Anonymous

asha

premise ok. needs a lot of work on grammar. someone has to handhold the author

Sep 11 '16
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Yagnavalkya

True ... I am bad at grammer ... but good at story telling ... god please help me

Nov 20 '16
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The Galactic Conspiracy: Truth, Lies and Pleiades

asha

def has promise. people with interesting in imaginative/ science fiction should comment.

Sep 11 '16
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asha

I am glad and greedy that this is getting published. I can smell the food almost

Sep 11 '16
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Professors Gone Wild

asha

needs a little polishing otherwise interesting

Sep 11 '16
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Jitendra Prasad

Thank you for the review.

Sep 12 '16
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Slaves on Earth

asha

I lost interest in the first few pages. may be good for people who like science fic

Sep 11 '16
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Standing On Your Coffin

asha

many layers. Not sure how good but it seems interesting

Sep 11 '16
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The Secret Diary of a Gossip Queen

asha

loved the prologue and the contrast between the chapters. synopsis looks interesting

Sep 11 '16
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Corpokshetra

asha

piece of shit

Sep 11 '16
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asha

engrossing

Sep 11 '16
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