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I felt the insomniac struggling through day to day life. These pages are not enough to judge further. Good luck anyway.
Found some unusual usage of words here and there. Keep working on it. Horror is not my favorite genre. Good luck though!!
I just found one fault. The way in which the word partiality is used....I found it weird and slightly out of place. But kudos to this wonderful and innovative effort bro. Mahabharata from this angle was kinda brilliant attempt.
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Shatru is unbelievably serious and his seriousness is downright funny. A lot of people will get offended if this gets published. LOLZ
The first one was a bit lengthy. But it has explored a lot of emotions and angles. The second one, I just couldn't understand he protagonist, but the writing style made it dark and the third story was really a dun read. I loved Shantaram!!