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The story does not sound real life one, it sound much filmy. But, the topic is good. There needs to be some changes at some places. to be frank, reading it felt that the book is written by a first timer. The skeleton of the story is good, but the flow is not sound, as I said earlier, it sounds filmy. Also, I doubt if the concept of karma for the story revolving around it is solid. Would like to talk with the author to explain how to tweak the story to make it sound great!

Nov 04 '15
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Rashmi Rathi

Thanks for sparing time to read and give your feedback! Suggestions are always welcome!

Nov 04 '15
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