Chandreyee
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Interested in Indian history, I am a mere Capricorn girl from West Bengal, or perhaps not too mere, given the wild imaginations I weave around these mythological characters, which are thankfully close to what we have in our Puranas.

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Weapon of Vishnu

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Despite of the grammatical errors, which are sadly quite substantial in number, especially the erratic change in person occasionally and the zero-use of proper punctuation, I would say it is a pretty good one. The plot is gripping and intriguing, though the idea of anything iron harming the Pisacas sound too . . . what to say, superstitious. But that point is relatively ignorable, as this is a kind of "mythological fantasy", but anyways, the point isn't moot. Apart from the mentioned points, and that the manuscript needs a good amount of editing, I would say it's quite good for a nice read.

Oct 13 '16
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