Chetna
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Sixteen. Read, write, spread the joy :)

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Chetna

Love it. I really the style of writing, I think it would really connect with your target readership. At first, I had my doubts about it as it came across as inconvenient but I was wrong. You get accustomed to it as you read on. The storyline seems promising. I think it would make an entertaining book. I most certainly want to read further. Good luck!

Oct 01 '14
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Chetna

Well written. The only thing I would say is the detailing became slightly tedious after a while. At first, I thought it was quite beautiful, especially how the loss of the grandmother has been described in the child's POV. But as the story progressed, I got the feeling it focuses much much more on good writing than on the actual storyline. In my opinion, a book should have both in equal proportions. But maybe that's just me. All in all, it was a good read.

Oct 01 '14
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Chetna

I enjoyed reading this. The second story was especially adorable. I write the simplistic language and third person narration, which I think is the best way to tell short stories. Would love to read more of this!

Oct 01 '14
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Niyati Shinde

Thank you Chetna for the generous rating and awesome review :-) i'm so glad you found my stories adorable and liked the writing style... I'm sure you'll love the rest of the collection as well :-)

Oct 02 '14
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