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About Hetika Sanghani

love books...love reading...entrepreneur by profession....book reviewer by choice... read my reviews on hetikasanghani.blogspot.in

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Cruise To Life Ranjana Kamo

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THE DARK PERSPECTIVE Remesh

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Corpokshetra Deepak Kaul

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Seven Knocks Neha Nayak

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Void Sarang Kawade

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The Only One Jyothi S.D

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The Lost Ring Oshin Gulsia

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It Happened One Day Rashmi

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Wilting Tales Aviral Singh

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Irresistible dhruv sharma

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Brutal Uday Satpathy

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Free Fall Rajesh Shankaran

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On The Runway Krishna Teja

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It's Never Too Late Rakesh

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Kismet Rajangam Gopal

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Prakriti Rajangam Gopal

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Undesired Duty Harsh Arora

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Gangaajal Ravi Kumar

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Love Me Please! Ridhvig

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His Night Begins N. Murali

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A Mango Tree Akash Ahuja

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Yodha Kalpesh Vedak

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The Survival Krishnakumar

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Here I Am Shweta Chawre

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Chalta Hai Punit Pania

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The Presswallah Manjula Lal

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Dawn and Dusk Farahdeen Khan

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The Abstruse Harleen Vij

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Wow! & Weird! Sunil Gandhi

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Cruise To Life Ranjana Kamo

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THE DARK PERSPECTIVE Remesh

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Corpokshetra Deepak Kaul

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Seven Knocks Neha Nayak

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Void Sarang Kawade

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The Lost Ring Oshin Gulsia

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It Happened One Day Rashmi

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Wilting Tales Aviral Singh

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Irresistible dhruv sharma

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Brutal Uday Satpathy

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Free Fall Rajesh Shankaran

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On The Runway Krishna Teja

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It's Never Too Late Rakesh

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Prakriti Rajangam Gopal

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Undesired Duty Harsh Arora

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Love Me Please! Ridhvig

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His Night Begins N. Murali

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Yodha Kalpesh Vedak

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Here I Am Shweta Chawre

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Dawn and Dusk Farahdeen Khan

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The Abstruse Harleen Vij

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Cruise To Life

Hetika Sanghani

What a place to stop!!! Intrigued and excited to read further...The initial pages lack pace, but the book definitely picks up and the characters slowly get relatable... Good work!!

Feb 12 '16
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End to Start

Hetika Sanghani

Language is very simple....inspite of this the author has maintained some sort of interest throughout the narrative...the place where the 3rd chapter ends is perfect.. really makes u want to read the story ahead... nice and simple narrative... all the best!!

Feb 12 '16
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Nikhil Kulkarni

Many Thanks for your review, Hetika :)

Feb 12 '16
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Hetika Sanghani > Nikhil Kulkarni

Thank u for ur kind words.... will review it!!

Jan 25 '16
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Made in Heaven and all other Marriages

Hetika Sanghani

Loved the 1st and the 3rd story... the 3rd story almost makes you go awwww... just wish the second story was made a bit more interesting... but a good attempt and definitely want to read further... Good Job!!!

Sep 16 '15
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Forty Nine Shades Confused

Hetika Sanghani

Loved the concept...some parts are humorous... some are myraid... had to skim through some of the description... I wish it was written more interestingly because the concept does have the potential...

Sep 14 '15
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Hetika Sanghani

simple language...interesting read... u realize that the book is racy as it has a different story to tell so doesn't want to discuss the downfall in grave detail... the book has ended on a very intriguing note...definitely want to read further...

Sep 10 '15
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Rashmi Rathi

Thank you for taking time out for reading and giving your feedback! I am actually glad that someone at least figured out that "it has a different story to tell so doesn't want to discuss the downfall in grave detail." So glad! :)

Sep 10 '15
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Corpokshetra

Hetika Sanghani

a modern take with the characters of mahabharata.. few parts were engaging, few could be reworked.. wish it was more racy though...

Sep 10 '15
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Hetika Sanghani

I picked this up seeing the cover page...oh i loved it...I thought there would be something related to 50 shades of grey...but there was nothing...also there is too much description and very less dialogues...I wish to read more of dialogues...Inspite of all this it is an interesting read and I would like to read further but maybe I would want to read a couple of chapters more to decide whether it should be published or no...Wanted to give 3 stars but because of the grammatical errors giving 2...All the best!!

Mar 16 '15
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Deepak Kaul

Thank you for your review.

Mar 16 '15
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Hetika Sanghani

to start with the positives...loved the cover page and the title...definitely invokes interest...but what is disappointing is the story...it does not develop any interest...its very confusing...the passage of time is not clear...i wish the author could rewrite it as the synopsis also invokes interest...

Jan 27 '15
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Hetika Sanghani

this appears like a first draft...it requires a lot of rewriting and editing...also the passage of time is not clear...u get confused where is she and then u just skim through without paying attention to the time and place she is in...also there are a lot of adjectives used which makes it difficult to visualise while reading hence does not connect with the reader....i wish there was a little hint towards who she falls in love with...

Dec 15 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

Well written...I had a smile on my face throughout...felt like a teenager all over again...what i loved that the author has tapped the age well..this is exactly how teenagers talk..few things when we read as adults, we find them foolish but the author has not let that affect the narrative and continued well...i wish the synopsis had not let out the entire story...nevertheless a good read...want to read further...

Dec 12 '14
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Amarjeet Rathore

Beautiful Brilliant and Blissful start... story has ability to keep the reader glued to the book and eager to read further

Dec 16 '14
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Rajshree Chauhan

I tried calling them, guess I'll drop an email right away :)

Dec 13 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

I guess u should speak to BGB ADMIN and get it removed...

Dec 13 '14
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Rajshree Chauhan

I'm glad that you liked what you read. About me giving out the whole story as a synopsis, I submitted it thinking that I was telling the BGB admin about my story as a writer. Silly me, I didn't know it'll end up being available for the readers here!

Dec 13 '14
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Rajshree Chauhan

Hi Hetika,

Dec 13 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

The 3rd story was a different genre...the 1st two stories were all about rape and erotica...a very difficult genre to write...the premise of each and every story was good..i just wished they were constructed better...the climax doesn't validate the tension created throughout the stories (which is difficult to create)...a little bit of rewriting and editing will do the trick...

Dec 12 '14
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Sarang Kawade

The first story was about 377 not an erotica, if you failed to gather that. Second was a satire, not about rape. Thanks.

Dec 20 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

I have never read a book with mythological characters...well this book has made me wanting to read one...good portrayal of all the characters...well written...siya's character is etched beautifully...d writing has the power to help the reader visualise the era in which it is written...good job!!

Oct 07 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

i feel this book has such writing that some people will love it and some will hate....but what is the striking feature of the author is his fearlessness to write something out of the box...nt the story but the way it is written shows that the author is bold and doesnt get scared before trying something new...1st chapter is very interesting...second gets a little slow and it again picks towards the end...requires editing some places...but i just loved the feel of the book..some places it does get a little harsh towards females but thats what I loved about the author that he has fearlessly written his point of view...waiting to read further on...Good job...

Sep 24 '14
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Remesh

Spot On!! And Thank You.............

Oct 06 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

there is too much description in every statement making it very difficult to engage the reader cause it is very difficult to visualise such stories...could not complete it...not a style i enjoy reading...

Sep 24 '14
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Oshin Gulsia

Thank you for your valuable suggestion....but I think that there is at least one good thing about my book...it depicts that I'm a poet and I owe it's copyright....:)

Sep 27 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

Compliments for the cover page...Unfortunately the no of pages put up are way too less to judge it ...but whatever I have read I feel like reading more...simple language..simple story (till now)...characters are etched well...the flow of story is good...All the best!!

Sep 24 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

Initially the story is a little slow...What I didnt like abt the book is the introduction of characters, the transition from one story to another..it gets confusing and sumtyms u get lost...but it really picked up towards the end especially the 3rd chapter...absolutely enjoyed reading...some pages require editing...and ofcourse revamping of the introduction...but overall i liked the book and would really want to read further!!!

Aug 25 '14
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Shankar Venkatraman

Thanks Hetika!

Aug 26 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

Story No.1 and Story No.3 are predictable but it was a pleasure reading them for the way it is written...Story no.2 also gets you going as in you want to know what will happen ahead..loved reading the stories...want to read more...these are stories which I can read and enjoy as well as read to my niece who will enjoy it as much..Good work!!

Aug 25 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

The introduction of all 4 characters is written well....after that it is a drag until Rusty n Tanya....and then it maintains it's graph...I just wish certain unnecessary descriptions could hv been avoided...bt definitely intriguing and want to read how it the story enfolds as per the synopsis....

Aug 19 '14
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Gaurav Bist

Hetika, appreciate the time invested into reading & initial review. This novel is based on true events. But I’ll still bracket it under fiction. An amalgamation of Imagination, dreams, truth & my experiences.

Aug 21 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

3 simple stories...evoke simple emotions...these are stories that v observe in everyday life while goin on with our routine...d only flaw i felt was some portions get very descriptive which is unnecessary....but would definitely want to read ahead....

Aug 19 '14
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Aviral Singh

Thanks, Hetika, for reviewing the book.

Aug 21 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

I love reading short stories and I was really wondering how I had not picked this book...very very simply written heartfelt stories...want to read all of them now!! :):D

Aug 01 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

Aww m so happy to hv made your day!!!Yes waiting to read all of them...All the best!!

Aug 05 '14
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Niyati Shinde

Thank you Hetika for the review and rating :-) Coming from an avid reader like you, it made my day! :-) Glad you liked the stories. I'm sure you'll like the rest of them as well, especially, 'Unfaithful' and 'Hype about love'

Aug 02 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

The storyline is interesting...it is similar to the recently released Rajnikanth movie-"Kochadiyan"...I definitely want to know how the king deals with the matter...would have gone ahead and given 5 stars but for the grammatical errors...requires a lot of editing...but definitely a good story...

Jul 31 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

A new way of writing a book...feel good..loveddd the way social media is used for writing the entire story...really liked reading whatever is put up...would definitely want to read more....Aniesha-very good job!!

Jul 31 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

They will...I am sure :):)

Aug 05 '14
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Aniesha Brahma

Hi Hetika,
Thank you for reading and reviewing my book. I hope others love the story as much as you did. *fingers crossed*
Thanks again!!

Jul 31 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

simple writing...simple story...easy to understand..heartfelt...really want to see how it unfolds...characters of the 2 girls are drawn really well..good job!!

Jul 31 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

I like the concept of all three stories but somehow found myself lost while reading it..Difficult to visualise the stories right from the beginning to the end...requires editing..but Ravi is definitely talented and brave to opt for something different....

Jul 30 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

Very different and interesting concept...At every stage,curiosity gets the better of you and you want to see how the story unfolds...definitely something i havent read before...

Jul 30 '14
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Pritesh Bhosale

Thanks Hetika for honest review!

Jul 31 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

A very intelligent book....the thought process behind the book is brilliant...the brainchild behind "Art"'s character is very well written...The book just requires some editing as in some parts it becomes a lil boring and you have to scape through...bt good job!! definitely want to read further...

Jul 28 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

From what is put up here you cannot make up much of the story that will unfold..wished the writer had enlisted some more so would have been able to give it a better review...bt enjoyed whatever is put up....good job!!

Jul 28 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

Lovely start to the story...love the way the tension is created..the ragging scene and 4 friends and engineering college looked straight out of "Five point someone" or "3 idiots"..Nonetheless, would definitely want to read further and desperately want to know how their love story forms and grows and falls back...

Jul 24 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

This book doesnt promise to give you recipes that you have'nt seen or read about before...Sticks to its title this book is for quick recipes and for people who absouletly do not know cooking and hv to cook due to untoward circumstance...what I as a reader loved about this book is the fact that every recipe has a story and a lovely captured picture..less options for vegetarians but definitely want to try "Halloween Sambhar"...the spinach recipe doesnt look any different from the normal ones..nonetheless enjoyed the stories and want to read many more...

Jul 24 '14
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Meghana Joshi

Thanks Hetika!

Aug 05 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

Yes definitely!!!

Aug 05 '14
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Lakshmi Ramachandran

Thanks Hetika, Do try the Halloween Sambhar and let us know.

Jul 29 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

This book has a graph...sometimes its very interesting...n other times it just goes down and you cannot visualise anything and you feel a lil lost...but again it gets its grip... ends on a very very gripping note...some parts could be edited and revamped...would definitely want to read further!!!

Jul 21 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

:):).....well forgot to mention...loved satyawati's character is etched beautifully....her independence is very appealing!!!

Jul 21 '14
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dhruv sharma

Thank you for being the first one to review. The review indeed is honest and I shall see to it that the shortcomings are subsided

Jul 21 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

The most striking feature of this book is that it is narrated by a lot of people still it is not confusing...you can understand whats happening and the story connects well...will definitely want to read more...

Jul 17 '14
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Ananya Garg

Thank you so much Hetika :) I hope you enjoy the whole book :)

Jul 20 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

I just could not visualise the stories...didnt enjoy the writing...as a reader I do not enjoy books written this way...

Jul 10 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

This book about a girl fighting cancer seems like her diary that she writes noting all her experiences for the same...will definitely want to read more to know the actual outcome of this entire situation and also how she fights the dreaded disease of today-cancer....

Jul 10 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

Simple and honest emotions captured through short tales..a good effort..enjoyed reading all 3 stories...good effort!!!

Jul 10 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

M happy to have motivated you....

Aug 05 '14
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Dr Amit Bidwe

Thanks a lot. Sorry for delayed reply, I was unaware of this feedback mode. Your feedback motivated me ...

Jul 21 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

i dont know what is with this book-so many recommendations, constant smiling while reading....it is beyond brilliant..do not have enough words to express how beautifully it is written and how appealing it is!!! Tanaya-is this your 1st book??? i cant believe it...wat are you doing woman-please write more coz u r gifted.... I am actually going to pray for this book to be published because it truly deserves to be...I can see it doing great as a paperback and also as a bollywood movie....brilliant..splendid..heartfelt...and wenever I am down I am definitely going to read these chapters again cause it really just changes my mood!!! Once again Tanaya-you are brilliant...Please write more!!!

Jul 09 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Hetika, this makes me smile every single time I read it! Thank you very much :D

Jul 27 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

waiting to read further!!!

Jul 04 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

When you have a problem you discuss it with your friends and they give u solutions to deal with it...This book is like that..simple language..easy to understand...easy to relate to examples..definitely makes you want to try out the solutions enlisted atleast once...one more mention-fantastic cover page!!!

Jul 04 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

Thank you so much!!!

Aug 05 '14
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Jahnavi Chintakunta

Thanks a lot Hetika. Your review is very encouraging. Congratulations on being the top#2 reviewer .

Jul 07 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

First of all i did not understand the 1st chapter at all...i did manage through the 2nd and the 3rd chapter but somehow could not understand where the story was heading....the story could not live upto the synopsis which was quite interesting..

Jul 03 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

140 pages of sheer gripping pages...just absolutely loved the flow, the tension created and the way the story unfolds...The most striking feature is Uday's brilliance of narrating so many stories together without creating any confusion...infact adding to the tension created making you want to read more and more...Uday-if BGB doesnt publish your manuscript I am definitely bribing you into giving me the entire manuscript...lol....cant wait to know more!!!

Jul 02 '14
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Uday Satpathy

Couldn't have asked for a better review. Thanks a lot Hetika.

Jul 02 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

#2 as a "Hot Shot Reviewer" and #4 as a "Bookworm"....yaaayyy so happy!!!

Jul 01 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

Thank You Uday!!!

Jul 02 '14
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Uday Satpathy

Congrats Hetika!

Jul 02 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

thanks niyati!!!

Jul 01 '14
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Niyati Patel

Congratulations Hetika! :)

Jul 01 '14
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Hetika Sanghani > Niyati Shinde

Hii Niyati... Thank you so much for your kind words...:) Kudos to BGB!!!

Jul 01 '14
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Hetika Sanghani > Samiksha Gupta

Thank You so much for the recommendation...will definitely read it!!

Jun 30 '14
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Samiksha Gupta

My pleasure :-)..

Jun 30 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

this is one of the books where you are very anxious and curios to know what happens next...really liked the concept...something different and interesting....would definitely want to read further....

Jun 24 '14
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Harleen Vij

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Hetika.

Jun 27 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

Could not complete the 3 chapters...found it boring...

Jun 24 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

These are those kind of stories that friends have when they meet for coffee..simple stories..just wish each story could have been a bit longer hence giving a stronger message across..nonetheless...good work!!

Jun 24 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

A book that me and my niece can sit together and enjoy reading....wonderfully written...could actually imagine everything described in the book very easily.....a fantasy world...loved the details with which the book is written...simplicity at its best!!! would most definitely want to embark in the journey with Nitya and Arya....fabulously written..do not have enough words...Sapna-God bless you...you are truly gifted....

Jun 17 '14
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Sapna Bhattacharya

Thanks Hetika. With tears in my eyes and at a loss of words to express, I can only say as a writer your review means a lot to me and will always be an inspiration to me.

Jun 17 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

just scraped through the first story...did not like the end and somehow could not believe kaka's split personality(do dynamic and go-getter but still meek in front of his brainless wife)...that disappointment could not let me read through the second and third story....could have been better...

Jun 16 '14
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Badrinath Nuggehalli

Hi Hetika. Thanks for reviewing ... everybody's feedback is useful. My story says every person is full of contradictions ... that's what makes human beings so interesting! Why not try the other stories? They are quite different.

Jun 28 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

seeing the reviews was really excited to pick this one up...the first chapter was gripping b ut after I started the second chapter it was just a drag...didnt enjoy it...didnt quite relate to the writing...also didnt enjoy the flow...could have really been better....

Jun 16 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

First of all I am aghast that this book doesnt have a single review...Loved the writing...Loved the chapters..something different...well done Rajangam Gopal!!1

Jun 13 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

I would definitely rate this 3.5 stars...really liked the build up..the excitement...very beautiful transitions from past to present and back to past again...just wished that the 3rd chapter would continue atleast a little bit of what was left in the 2nd chapter...nonetheless would want to read more...

Jun 13 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

Yes i wish that too....All the best!!!

Jun 13 '14
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Sayan Bhattacharya

Thank you for reviewing my book and for your comments and constructive feedback Hetika !! Wish you get to read the entire book soon !

Jun 13 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

I dont know what I liked in the book but i genuinely liked it...I am actually waiting to read her journey from being a couch potato to a writer...Simple writing but engaging...Would definitely want to read more....

Jun 06 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

The synopsis mentioned alisha talking to him which makes him feel that it was a wrong decision...somehow i was waiting for that...the chapters can be divided into 2 halves...one praising devika and the other praising alisha...Somehow didnt connect with me...nonetheless all the best!!

Jun 06 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

Lovedd each and every line mentioned in the book...All three stories are heartfelt and make you want to read more and more....Superbly written....Superbly thought of...Nuzhat-You are truly a gifted writer....There are books and then there are heat enticing "WoundCollectors"....Amazingly written...Nuzhat-you have found an admirer in the name of Hetika Sanghani....

Jun 05 '14
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Nuzhat Aziz

Thank you so much Hetika... just inspires me to write more often

Jun 05 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

As was reading through I had decided that i will give this book 3 stars but story #3 made me change my mind....just loved story #3...yes i also agree that the stories are more suspense kind than horror but i enjoyed reading them...something different..would want to read more stories if they are as interesting as the 3rd one....

Jun 04 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

your welcome :)

Jun 05 '14
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Shantesh Sunil Row

Thanks Hetika. Well, there are a total of 15 stories in the book and you've read just the first 3. The other stories are more aligned towards horror/ghosts, etc. These 3 on site had a mix of a ghost story, a werewolf tale and a thriller. Thanks for your comments and rating. Appreciated, Shantesh

Jun 05 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

Firstly i must admit the reason I picked this book for reading was the fantastic cover...its just brilliantly done....Secondly after that cover, the story was a disappointment...more emphasis is laid on the conversations between the brothers wherein they are just plainly praising each other and very less emphasis is on developing the story....did not enjoy it...

Jun 03 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

Really want to appreciate Story No.2 and 3...Being an entrepreneur myself it is always encouraging to read stories where new ideas for business are shown and also how a person overcomes his problems and starts afresh...very simple reading...Good work!!

Jun 03 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

3 stories....all three equally gripping and left at a point where u r disgusted as you want to know what will happen next...very very strong introduction....lovely use of vocab...the chapters were of international standard....MOST DEFINITELY want to read the remaining chapters...Kudos to all three writers!!!!

May 30 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

You're welcome :):)

Jun 05 '14
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Shubhra Rishi

Hi Hetika, thank you for taking the time out to read our book. Your review is so encouraging. A BIG Thank you! :-)

Jun 02 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

omg its very gripping....really wish your work gets selected and I get to read the remaining chapters...Ananthanarayanan-really good job!!!

May 29 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

your welcome :)

Jun 05 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

You're welcome :)

Jun 05 '14
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Ananthanarayanan V

Thank you so much for your kind words. Really means a lot. Have a blessed day ahead.

May 29 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

Very gripping first chapter.....but as i read more and more it just got boring....i couldnt even finish the chapters (which is a new for me as till now I have never put down a book)...I am actually clueless...don't know what went wrong as i absolutely loved the first chapter.....don't know what's wrong with this one but definitely could have been much better after the gripping first chapter.....

May 29 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

You're welcome :)

Jun 05 '14
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Ridhvig

hey! Thanks for your feedback.

May 30 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

Interesting concept... After reading the synopsis was really looking forward to read the initial chapters but I found myself lost in the characters...also didnt enjoy the flow of the characters coming in and out....there is too much happening all at once...plethora of characters spoil the way the story unfolds.....still confused with exactly happened and what exactly is the main plot.....

May 29 '14
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Krishna Teja

Thank You, I shall try to establish a better flow. But these characters are important for the story that was the reason i had to introduce them in the beginning. I shall try to make it better. Thanks for the review :)

May 29 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

loved the start...loved the flow...loved Sid....was going to rate it 4 stars but the conversations between the 2 in hindi kind of spoiled it a lil for me..if they had an option would definitely rate it 3.5 stars....nonetheless,feel good 3 chapters, would definitely want to read more.....

May 29 '14
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Siddarth Dudheria

Thanks Hetika. I've made a very conscious effort to keep hindi to make it very natural. Quite a few of those conversations are *real* :)

Jun 02 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

2 stories going on parallelly....both interesting....i have seen this topic just in bollywood movies...have never read the same....intrigued to know more....N.Murali- a good attempt...would definitely want to read how the stories intermingle and the climax ofcourse.... Already in love with Virat Nariman:):)

May 26 '14
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N. Murali

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review my book excerpt. Appreciate it.

Jun 30 '14
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