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Keen ToLearn

Ah finally am able to review the book. Loved it Rashmi. Gripping. But a few queries. Are these the first three chapters ? So much is happening within the first few pages. I wish it was taken slower. For you to take us slowly through his perfect life. So that we will also be as crestfallen as him when everything is snatched away. Having said that I assume you have a reason for making it fast. Maybe the story starts only after the fall. Looking forward to reading the rest. And all the best

Sep 08 '15
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Rashmi Rathi

Yes these are the first 3 chapters. And as you guessed it right the story begins after the fall. People are already trying to cope with their own stress and negativity in life. My intention is to not linger on the negative aspects but let people experience the soothing positive aspects so the pace slows down after the first 3 chapters and you will be taken on an entirely new journey from there on. Thanks for taking time out and reading. Appreciate your feedback.

Sep 08 '15
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