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I totally agree on Uday Satpathy :)
I am a huge "Mahabharata" fan, but the story you have mentioned is available in various books like "The struggle of Bhishma", "The son of Ganga".
As far as I know, my book is not the story of Bheeshma but a multi pov book which gives the pov of various characters and I have follwex kmg translation of mahabharata as well as CE for most of the incidents. But I shall certainly read the books you mentioned.
A small correction... how can seeta serve cups of tea when there is a corpse next to the room? I hope the story is good after the initial chapters.
Agreed, but condolence is a different thing, here the corpse is just next to the room.
For your information, in most of the Hindu households across India - both in the South and in the North - would never send a person who's come for condolence without giving them a cup of tea or coffee. The ebook is available on Amazon: http://www.amazon.in/ebook/dp/B01CM794TG
Thanks Komal...would like to know your comments too!
Nice story. This one needs to be published!
I will also love to read more reviews on this.
I would like to suggest the author to read two books currently on BGB.
1)End To Start
2) Summons from the creator
You can learn to give a pace to your story from the above two.Good effort even though.