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Great idea and a very well written book. I think the book will be stronger if you shorten the introduction and put the childhood details as a postscript. The portions with Channa are very good, he is a real star and the story should ideally start with him.
The story of Godna kept me hooked. There is a very authentic feel to the description of village life. The first chapter is not as strong as the next two.
The stories are very well written.
The description of Manasi's attempts to survive after the earthquake are very vivid and kept me hooked. I would definitely want to read the rest of the book.
The start could be stronger, also there are some minor typos like carrier for career etc.
Thanks manjula :)