My Big Fat Un-Wedding
Tanaya Mokashi

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Synopsis

When people ask me what this book is all about, I don’t know where to start. Yes, it’s a love story. Yes, it will strike a chord with the readers because of its simplicity and honesty radiating through the pages. Someone asked me the other day if it’s comparable to Eric Segal’s Love Story. Well no, it isn’t. As an unpublished author, I cannot vouch for it being as amazing as a classic. But what I can vouch for is that this story will remain with you, long after you’ve finished reading it.

The book is set partly in Mumbai, and partly in the US. I chose cities that spoke volumes of the main characters’ ambitions, careers and fast paced lives. The main characters, Krish and Avantika, who, true to their twenty-first century upbringing are still finding a place for themselves in life, and like any struggle, it’s not an easy one. Love is something they encounter along the way, not having planned it.

A book that explores themes of ambition and values, but mostly of love and family, it’s something you have to read to understand why the story’s special. From the innocence of yet-another-Friday-night-date blooming into an epic romance, as Avantika and Krish go through life, as they know it (NOT), this story promises to touch you and haunt you at the same time.

The story isn’t about eternal love. But it is about hope which exists where there is love. It is about growing up and facing our demons along the way. It is about love which lives on despite its flaws and imperfections. It is about whether our twenty year old dreams matter in the face of a twenty second adversity. It is about a girls’ journey to find her prince charming just Like Krish loves Avantika.

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Jun 23 '15
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Sep 18 '14
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Vishal Rajput

What I think about the book?

A desperate attempt to get attention of readers. Does it succeed in that? God, no.

How are the characters described?

Apparently the author thinks there is no need to describe them.

What was the writing style?

Style? The writer writes her personal diaries. So don't expect anything.

Conclusion?

I cry for literature.

Sep 16 '14
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Kavya Ramesh

Brilliant book. Definitely something that young Indian readers can relate to. Very well written and well sequenced. For a person who doesn't read many books, I was completely glued to it since the moment I started reading it. That itself says a lot. This book needs to be published asap. I'll be the first few in line to buy it. Cheers! Job well done Tanaya Mokashi!

Sep 14 '14
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Mamatha Shanbhag

Good going... Waiting for the book to be published!!

Sep 14 '14
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Amish Sharma

Highly recommended for teenagers.

Grown ups, please do not pay any attention, else you might end up hitting your end on the wall.

Sep 10 '14
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Vrinda

Congratulations Tanaya ! Fantastic work. This book should be published and many more books to follow.

Sep 06 '14
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Sep 04 '14
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Sumati

Good one for the teenage-blooming-love sorts. What is lacking is the description of characters or places even before it's introduced to the readers. Too lengthy chapters for reviewing the book. But, it's gripping and interesting. All the best!

Sep 03 '14
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komali

First of all congratulations Tanaya! It is an amazing piece of work. What I liked best is that the feelings of the characters are so frankly expressed. You have brought out the emotions beautifully. The flow from one page to another is smooth and keeps one so involved that you want to know what happens next. I hope the book gets published soon so I can read further. All the best!

Sep 03 '14
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Saumya Awasthi

An interesting, well written story.
Something the young adults can relate to.
Must read. I would surely recommend this book.

Sep 02 '14
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Niyati Shinde

Decent read... However, tends to drag a bit.. Please add more twists, it will keep us readers hooked. Loved the prologue, so am definitely waiting to find out how that happens! Good Luck... :-)

Sep 02 '14
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Rashmi Mokashi

Good Work Tanaya...I am amazed by your writing, feel connected to the characters in the book. Keep it up!!! Waiting for the book now.

Sep 01 '14
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akshay rane

loved this!!! keep it up.
would love to read further as well !

Aug 31 '14
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sonali jadhav

i really like the story,the way of describing all moment lovely well scripted.

Aug 31 '14
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Rajeev Sapre

Very good book tanaya, keep it up

Aug 31 '14
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kanchan

Nice start.

Aug 31 '14
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Pushkar Sapre

Good Book Tanaya.

Aug 31 '14
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Pushkar Sapre

The book is very good. The story and characters are good indeed.
This book should be published.

Thanks.

Aug 31 '14
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Ria

Wow tanaya! That is some really great work. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to readin more.

Aug 31 '14
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Aditya Pandey

A disappointment!!! Its hard to visualize, hallucinate, imagine or anything as the characters lack prominent descriptions. The novel has that immaturity which irks the reader. I feel the writer should work on her writing style by reading lot of books and understanding that how the characters are defined and brought to reality from pages.
This kind of writing will woo limited audience. For mass, you need to adapt and take these reviews as a lessons. With all due respect !!!

Aug 30 '14
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mrunali

good luck!!

Aug 27 '14
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Mrugesh C

Tanaya! What a start! You are sending me the rest of the story today itself!
Amazing set of characters you've got here. The chemistry/bonding among the group of friends is well depicted. The story should connect really well with collegiates and young adults alike.
Definitely hope that you continue doing what you're doing AND write awesome stuff like this. All the very best!

Aug 23 '14
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Rohil

This is a great book!
I'd definitely recommend this to anyone!
Honestly, I can relate with all of these characters perfectly! :)

Aug 21 '14
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chaitali

After reading this manuscript I felt like ..Y did I took so long to start reading your book.Specially the start, continuously making me smile.It is really so appealing that I am waiting for its published version..

Aug 20 '14
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Vijay Wade

Must read book ... should get published sooner :)
waiting for its launch ...

Aug 19 '14
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Damini Majumdar

There are a few things I liked about the books and a few which I didn't. The best part, I think, is that it is extremely fast-paced. But then, probably a little too fast-paced. Events keep taking place, one after another, a little too quickly. There is no elaborated description of places, emotions and the events whatsoever.

The title is pretty interesting and so is the prologue. But there are certain things I couldn't relate to. First of all, you meet a guy, start crushing over it on the very first day..um all right but is falling in love really that easy?! Its beyond my understanding. Then we get that how much a best friend means to a person, irrespective of their gender, so using words like 'bestestest' and dragging on this matter several times unnecessarily was quite annoying. And most importantly, was it really necessary to use so many Hindi phrases in between? Don't you think that narrows down the range of your reader? How do you think people, who don't know Hindi, will understand the concerned parts? Lastly the narration- it chirpy and bubbly, all right but I found it a bit immature. I apologize for the harsh words because I know you must have put a great effort in writing it and as much as I hate to discourage you, I must say that this one could have been written better.

So over all, the book was okay, I'd say. I'm curious about how the story will unfold in later parts, since it ends kinda abruptly with a twist. Moreover, the mystery mentioned in the prologue is yet to be disclosed, so I'd like to read the whole book..

Aug 05 '14
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Sapna Bhattacharya

Good going!

Aug 04 '14
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Mariam Elphis George

Very good work.quite entertaining

Aug 03 '14
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vvsan97

Great story teller. Binds the reader, and makes it hard to stop reading. Whats app moments at times are long drawn but the story makes up for it.

Aug 03 '14
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Shubhojeet Biswas

It's a shame that I am giving one star to this book when it does not deserve a single one. May be I am sounding rude at the moment but the truth is if you want to be a writer please work on your writing. Do not come up with your bedroom writings and publish them in a hope that it will find its market, since teenagers in India can read and they will read if you lure them with a love story.

First of all, if you want to use so many Hindi phrases in between, why don't you write a book in Hindi. Are you ashamed? Well, in that case, there is not much one can do.

Your writing is very immature. Yes it is. You can hate me for this but the truth is - compare yourself with published writers. If you want to get published and find a reasonably good readers, not the teenagers who can read any crap, then work on it.

You are using phrases like aawwww, some utter hindi non sense and the words like omg bestestestestest.... My goodness, are you out of your mind? I am sorry but there are people who have got some taste.

Readers who have given here 5 star ratings and praised the writings - are you writers' relative or bestestestest buddies, or simply idiots? Because seriously, how can you like this piece of work.

Overall experience - seriously disappointed with the readers' community here.

Aug 02 '14
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Soumyaraj Bose

It's raining outside. You're supposed to feel love in the air when it rains outside. I don't. Not a big romantic. It's cold enough to feel anything else. Now, how do I feel about Krish & Avantika's story? Honestly, I haven't completed reading a book in two years. And I read their story in 2 hours. Read it. The whole of it. And now, how do I feel? Well, it's cold outside, but I do feel a little warm. Still not a big romantic, but I feel some love in the air. Kudos, Tanaya. Waiting to read the rest of it!

Jul 31 '14
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Harshal Dingorkar

awsome... hope it gets published.. :) all the best.

Jul 28 '14
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Ravindranatha Maroli

I liked the content of the book, which is excellently written
and would definitely look forward to read the book on being
published...

Jul 27 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks very much :D

Jul 27 '14
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ANITA BHANDARY

The Book has been written superbly with a strong story line and
I feel inquisitive to know the final story and eagerly waiting to
read the book after publishing..

Jul 27 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you :D

Jul 27 '14
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Jul 27 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks!

Jul 27 '14
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Swagata Vijayakar

Author looks talented and surely has bright future in this field

Jul 26 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you :D

Jul 27 '14
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Abhimanyu

Good work ! really good to read ..
wish it gets publishd soon ..

Jul 24 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks :D

Jul 27 '14
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Rayner Vaz

This really makes you feel...
extremely impressive , Awesome work!
further part of the story .fastt i m waiting... :D

Jul 24 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Rayner!

Jul 27 '14
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Jul 24 '14
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Dhaval Daterao

Great relativity, good humor and cool Script!!!
That's what makes this book much better than the others...
Great going girl, keep it up... :-)

Jul 24 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Dhaval!

Jul 27 '14
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Anushree Fernandes

A good read while travelling , since the language is quite breezy. While publishing hoping to see a more interesting and quirky book cover, though they say 'don't judge a book by its cover' , it can surely be made more eye catching. keep up the good work , best of luck.

Jul 23 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks!

Jul 27 '14
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Puja

Keep up the good work...

Jul 22 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks!

Jul 27 '14
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Madhugandha

Keep up with good work:-)

Jul 22 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you, Madhugandha!

Jul 27 '14
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Hardik Gupta

It is a good book as of now. Just want to know how they end up. If it is raining outside and you are at home and don't know what to do? Ans: then just read this book. The writing style is lively and highly spirited. I also think there can be a movie adaptation of your book.

Jul 22 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Hardik!

Jul 27 '14
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swapnaR

Very good tanaya.
All the best for the future!

Jul 22 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you :D

Jul 27 '14
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rohit kotkar

baap..:D
want to read it further asap..

Jul 21 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Rohit!

Jul 27 '14
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Adeline Edbor

All the best Tanaya, Well done and keep it up.

Jul 21 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks!

Jul 27 '14
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rohit nikalje

nice work ,loved the characters, hope it gets published :)

Jul 21 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks :)

Jul 27 '14
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rajas

great story and good concept......awesome book to read and great cover page...eagerly waiting for it to get published......:)

Jul 21 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks :D

Jul 27 '14
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Sushant Sharma

hey brilliant work , awesome storyline , really good chemistry between krish and avantika. actually i felt like i was the krish in the story.would like too read further,waiting for it too get published..All the best Keep it up :)

Jul 21 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Hehe! Thanks, Sushant! :D

Jul 27 '14
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rajan

nice book..!!!

Jul 17 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you :D

Jul 27 '14
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Vijay Barve

Amazing start followed by beautiful narration!I wish to get a hand onto final book.Good luck :)

Jul 15 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks!

Jul 27 '14
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pranav

Nice wrk.. Waiting to read more!

Jul 14 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks :D

Jul 27 '14
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ShubhamPatil

Excellently written !!

Jul 14 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks!

Jul 27 '14
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shradha.k

descent writing.Can relate with characters of Krish and Avantika.Good job.All the best :)

Jul 14 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks!

Jul 27 '14
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Jul 14 '14
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Vibha Prashanth

good job! :)

Jul 13 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you :)

Jul 27 '14
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Saahil

Well written, looking forward to the further parts of the story!

Jul 13 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Saahil!

Jul 27 '14
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Ashwin Nair

Feels like reading an obnoxious teenage girl's diary with so many cliches that I needed a calculator to count them all. You tried to incorporate the conflicting Indian and American personalities together in the lead female and it just made that character seem like a wannabe. And seriously, too many cliches. It gives a highly unoriginal feel to your writing. All these worn out phrases don't do any benefit to your story.

Jul 12 '14
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Jul 12 '14
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Jahnavi Chintakunta

Such a Cute love story. Loved every bit of it.All the best Tanaya

Jul 11 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you :)

Jul 27 '14
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Prathamesh Sawant

Awesome Story :D :D :D

Jul 11 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks!

Jul 27 '14
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Tanvi Sawant

very touching! keep it up!

Jul 11 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks!

Jul 27 '14
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sailee bhogwekar

REally nice story , krish and avantika, very romantic <3 :D , nd perfect book to read during this monsoon season.
very well written. Wanna read further soon,published it ASAP. :D
and all the best ...

Jul 11 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Sailee!

Jul 27 '14
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SHRUTI

Very well written!
Would like to read more..
All the best Tanaya! :D

Jul 11 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Shruti!

Jul 27 '14
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Pratibha Chikhalikar

I am curious to know what happens next.The book is very nicely written.Though it is Tanaya's debut venture it is amazing.

Jul 11 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you :D

Jul 27 '14
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Vinita Nambiar

Its simply Awesome!Beautiful story and lovely characters.Eagerly waiting for the next chapters.All the best,Tanaya:D

Jul 11 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Vinita!

Jul 27 '14
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Jul 10 '14
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Akash Arora

Fantastic Book. As the Author said "Simplicity and honesty" radiating through the pages. Loved it. Eagerly waiting for the published version. Well done TANAYA!

Jul 10 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you :D

Jul 27 '14
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poonamk

Very beautiful story. I wish to read further. Wish to grab a copy from stores very soon. All the best Tanaya! :)

Jul 10 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks :D

Jul 27 '14
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priyanka

An amazing book with characters so real that i can totally relate with them.

Jul 10 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Priyanka!

Jul 27 '14
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Anuj

Nice read..!

Jul 10 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks!

Jul 27 '14
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sanket

Great book...want to read further

Jul 10 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you :D

Jul 27 '14
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Akshay mendki

Amazing work tanaya ,very well written .loved the storyline , definitely it holds the reader till the end.
hope so this book gets published in stores soon , want to read it further ASAP :)
and all the best ..

Jul 10 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Akshay!

Jul 27 '14
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Akshata

I loved the originality of the story and author's simple style of narration. Amazing read. Keep up the good work Tanaya! Hope to see this book in stores soon. Good luck! :)

Jul 10 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Akshata!

Jul 27 '14
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Jaditi.1993@yahoo.com

Great work Tanaya! Looking forward to read further :-)

Jul 10 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you! :D

Jul 27 '14
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Rajesh Shankaran

Well done, Tanaya. It has the irreverence of a chick-lit with the pacing of a thriller. Definitely want to read more.

Jul 10 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you!

Jul 27 '14
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The Dark Knight

Definitely a five star rating for this breezy read. I could so much relate to Avantika and Krish. The conversation that Avantika has with her father, in part three, is in flesh and blood. I remember being this scared when changing my career path, and wished I had told my dad about it a little earlier than I eventually did. When I have a copy of this book in hand, I'll surely re-read it sitting by the window, with a cup of tea in hand, and enjoying the Mumbai rains. Wish you the very best in life, Tanaya. Looking forward to many more novels by you.

Jul 10 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, The Dark Knight :P

Jul 27 '14
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Ayushi Agarwal

Absolutely amazing book, Brilliantly written.
Should be definitely published.
Kudos to the author

Jul 10 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Ayushi!

Jul 27 '14
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Pulak Gupta

A well written book. Looking forward to the further part of story. :-)

Jul 10 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Pulak!

Jul 27 '14
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Raj D Rajpurkar

amazing writing!!! awesome work tanaya :) this book should get published!!!

Jul 09 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Raj!

Jul 27 '14
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Mahrukh Chikliwala

Fast read for the target audience it is written for. i hope in the later chapters there is some exploring of the premises stated in the synopsis which are relevant to this young, vulnerable age group. the writing style is peppy.

Jul 09 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you :)

Jul 27 '14
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Prajakta More

Awesome story tanaya..!!!beautifully written..all characters are beautifully portrayed..i actually started imagining things .. Great work Tanaya..! i wish this book get published soon

Jul 09 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Prajakta!

Jul 27 '14
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Ajinkya Mankar

Nice Story

Jul 09 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Ajinkya!

Jul 27 '14
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Ruta Amin

I thought I was done with chick-lit as a genre but I was wrong, this book is absolutely un-put-downable! Great job Tanya.I really hope this gets published, Kudos to you! :D

Jul 09 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Ruta!

Jul 27 '14
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Hetika Sanghani

i dont know what is with this book-so many recommendations, constant smiling while reading....it is beyond brilliant..do not have enough words to express how beautifully it is written and how appealing it is!!! Tanaya-is this your 1st book??? i cant believe it...wat are you doing woman-please write more coz u r gifted.... I am actually going to pray for this book to be published because it truly deserves to be...I can see it doing great as a paperback and also as a bollywood movie....brilliant..splendid..heartfelt...and wenever I am down I am definitely going to read these chapters again cause it really just changes my mood!!! Once again Tanaya-you are brilliant...Please write more!!!

Jul 09 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Hetika, this makes me smile every single time I read it! Thank you very much :D

Jul 27 '14
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Shreya

Must say, its simply AMAZING! The story line is appealing and all the characters are beautifully portrayed! Could relate to many of them. A great work for a first book! I'm sure this book will do wonders!! Waiting for the entire book to be published soon!

Jul 09 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Shreya!

Jul 27 '14
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Chanpreet Talwar

Just one word- BRILLIANT.Please send me an autographed copy when the book gets published. Keep up the good work Tanaya!

Jul 09 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Chanpreet!

Jul 27 '14
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Gaurang Margaj

it's an awesome book....seriously i don't kinda prefer love-story type of books but this book really strikes a chord.....can't wait to read the complete book......hope you get to publish it soon.....best of luck tanaya!!!!!

Jul 09 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Gaurang!

Jul 27 '14
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Mayur Rana

Very enjoyable read. It kept me glued. I loved the simplicity of characters. Waiting to read further. All the best !!

Jul 09 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Mayur!

Jul 27 '14
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Hardik Jain

A good fast paced read. The story seems interesting too. Would definitely like to read ahead to know what happens!

Jul 09 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Hardik!

Jul 27 '14
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Prajwal Tale

Great work Tanaya......It really has a awsome stuff .....Congrats....N wishing u a great success ahead....need a Hard copy of it

Jul 09 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Prajwal!

Jul 27 '14
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Ashok Parab

Honest story- telling, refreshing start and realistic characters.. Author's style of writing is really interesting. This book deserves to be published!! Good luck!!

Jul 09 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks :D

Jul 27 '14
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Sanika Ghodke

really good book awesome stuff tanaya!!
want to read more!
congrats :)

Jul 09 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Sanika!

Jul 27 '14
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Maruthi Ram

Very beautiful story. I read it all in one go. The characters are so real that I wonder if it's a fiction or personal story of the writer! Eagerly waiting to read further! Good luck!!

Jul 09 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you!

Jul 27 '14
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shalmali

ok that was INCREDIBLE!loved it.Makes me want a Krish Malhotra!well done

Jul 09 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Shalmali!

Jul 27 '14
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Anita Ajwani

One word- AMAZING! My Big Fat Un-Wedding is a beautifully written book. It is gripping and unputdownable. I instantly fell in love with the characters. Great work Tanaya!!

Jul 08 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Anita!

Jul 27 '14
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swamini lakade

Good book tanaya,good going and all the best for future.

Jul 08 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you!

Jul 27 '14
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Chandrakant

Nice story , very well written, i so wish,this book gets published, all the best!

Jul 08 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you :D

Jul 27 '14
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Tejas Pande

wonderful book ... great work! all the best

Jul 08 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Tejas!

Jul 27 '14
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kaustubh

phenomenal peace....the story grows and keeps on growing on you. the ability to create the live essays is just wonderful piece of writing conversations. livid narration

Jul 08 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you, Kaustubh!

Jul 27 '14
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Sawan Kumar

I loved the book.. Refreshing, original and simple writing. A very potent combination to reach the reader's hearts. Looking forward to read further. Best of luck!

Jul 08 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you :D

Jul 27 '14
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Natasha

The starting is amazing and gives an idea that the book is going for the one who loves chick flicks and love stories. The language is familiar and one can relate to it very well. For a beginner writer it is an amazing head-start.

Jul 08 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Natasha!

Jul 27 '14
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Pradnya Khochare

great book....interesting to read....well done...!!

Jul 08 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Pradnya!

Jul 27 '14
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Kangan Minocha

great book! should be definitely published. great attempt by the author.

Jul 08 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Kangan!

Jul 27 '14
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Moneel Shah

interesting book. not a big fan of reading.. but can relate hence i liked it

Jul 08 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Moneel!

Jul 27 '14
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Suraj Nair

Good book with a great story & a good use of words to express it!!!

Jul 08 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Suraj!

Jul 27 '14
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Vibhav Galadagekar

I'm not a person who enjoys a 'love stories' but was engaged in reading the book and liked it very much. the story has its ups and down, heartbreaks and happy phases. overall great attempt... keep it up. (y)

Jul 08 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Vibhav!

Jul 27 '14
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Akriti Sethi

A must read book.....really loved the book. This book kept me glued and I couldn't stop to read the pages continuously. The characters are way too relate-able, and sometimes the use of the common language along with the hindi sentences made the reader feel more connected to what the author actually wants to say. You should definitely write further and without a doubt, the book should be published. Fabulous work by the author!!

Jul 08 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Akriti!

Jul 27 '14
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Tejashree Pande

Nice job! liked the usage of words and yeah really enjoyed reading the book... the flow of the book and the characters everything just goes in a very nice order ... nicely placed ! Awesome book for fiction lovers ... All the best !!!

Jul 08 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Tejashree!

Jul 27 '14
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Darshan

Avantika Khanna

Jul 07 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Hehe :D

Jul 27 '14
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Rishikesh

Awesome Book! If this was supposed to be your first attempt, I assure you, you'll be much more successful than you ever dreamt. Liked every part of the story, since it had a blend of hindi and english slang, made it more interesting. Great job Tanaya! Looking forward to see this book become a bestseller. All the best for your future endeavors. Kudos!

Jul 07 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you, Rishikesh!

Jul 27 '14
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Ravindra Mistry

Awesome book written.
Reading this book was actual fun. the characters their discription and also the flow of story was good.
keeps the reader involved in the story and hope it continuous the same further.
overall awesome piece of book for readers.
Enjoy the book.

Jul 07 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you :D

Jul 27 '14
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Bhushan newallkar

M not much into reading books.. but loved the story, it keeps you involved in it and thats the nice thing about it..
wish this book gets published in the stores soon..
all the best ,

Jul 07 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Bhushan!

Jul 27 '14
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Pramod Khilari

Nice J0B !! Would love to read the book further !! Krish and Avantika will surely give U the rOcKinG news :D

Jul 07 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Pramod!

Jul 27 '14
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Ameya Ganme

Nice Read !

Jul 07 '14
1
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Ameya!

Jul 27 '14
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Mridul Chirania

Had a good time reading, especially because I could relate..the language used is so simple and perfect..good luck Toto !

Jul 07 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Mridul!

Jul 27 '14
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Tavishi Guleria

Great job! Can't wait to read more :)

Jul 07 '14
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1

Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Tavishi!

Jul 27 '14
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Jul 07 '14
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Aniket

Nice Book !!!

Jul 07 '14
1
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Aniket!

Jul 27 '14
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Roneel Paralkar

Great work , loved all the characters.. storyline looks good..hope to read full nook soon.
all the best..:)

Jul 07 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Roneel!

Jul 27 '14
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Palak

AMAZZINGGG book.... kept me glued through out..love the characters and the storyline.. cant wait to read the entire book.. Lovee KRISHH Too..its more than just a love story.. Amazing writing .
Good work Tanaya:)
waiting for a copy if this book in my house sson:)

Jul 07 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Palak!

Jul 27 '14
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Prachi Mehta

What a book ! The story and the characters are visualised amazingly ! Keeps one engrossed as to what will happen next ! You are doing this just right Tanaya !! Great work girl ! Way to go! Keep writing such amazing stories and books ! All the best :)

Jul 07 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Prachi!

Jul 27 '14
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nitin

It's really good one looking at the fist book by the young lady !

Jul 07 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you :D

Jul 27 '14
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Anuja Gupta

Story is well written,want to read further.Hope it gets published soon.Good luck!!!!

Jul 07 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Anuja!

Jul 27 '14
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Aviral Singh

The story, if targeted to attract a plethora of readers from the teenagers, is not serving the purpose. To begin with the prologue is interesting with an attempt to create a suspense, but the consequent chapters seem to be missing the imagination and narrative and thorough research and depiction about the place. The characters are loosely scattered here and there with mere threading. The writing style more of is a representation of a teenage girl talking to her diary instead of trying to engage the readers in the narrative. Remember the difference between a story and the same well written story holds a very important place in the reader's mind. The reader should be able to relate to the characters the way the protagonist does and that is achievable only with an awesome narrative. All the best..!!

Jul 07 '14
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Roli

Comprehended very well, good story line prod-casted uniquely. It was a pleasure reading the book. The book really got for publish. All the best & looking forward for more.

Jul 07 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Roli!

Jul 27 '14
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Prithvi Kolambkar

the phrases, wordings and everything about this book is awesome!! Waiting for the further part of the story!! Very well written! Keep up the good work! :) :D ;)

Jul 07 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Prithvi!

Jul 27 '14
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Sanjeev Navelkar

Nice book....worth reading !

Jul 07 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you, Sanjeev :D

Jul 27 '14
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Shraddha D

Its just unbelievable to know that this is the 'first book' from this author.Simple but effective language,graceful style..The story is woven effortlessly...guys do not miss this!!!Waiting to read moreGood job

Jul 07 '14
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Ashit Alva

this story is beautiful....n is very fresh...

Jul 07 '14
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Akshay Orpe

Nice work Tanaya! Keep it up! :)

Jul 07 '14
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19.tejal

Beautifully written!
Drama,humor,emotion,entertainment,craziness all combined together makes it an impossible to put down read!
Cant wait to read it in hardbound!

Jul 07 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Tejal!

Jul 27 '14
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Viraj Patil

I liked the simplicity of the story. Eager to know what happens next. I hope it gets published soon.
Good luck Tanaya. Keep up the good work :)

Jul 07 '14
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Sanjana Parikh

The beginning is interesting, catches the reader's attention. However, there is a lot of telling rather than showing, many cliches, and no imagery. A town so happening as New York has not been described at all for the readers. The ending of these three chapters is good, but I couldn't visualise anything in these three chapters, not even the characters.

Jul 07 '14
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Jul 07 '14
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Saurav singh

It's Mumbai not Bombay :P

Jul 07 '14
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Aditya Shirvalkar

Great book!!!!! Hope to see more books from you...... :)

Jul 07 '14
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Shyam Sutar

simple writing, simple dialogue, and great efforts.
liked this book of all i read yet.
would like to read the whole book.

Jul 07 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you! :D

Jul 27 '14
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Jul 07 '14
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Neha Goel

A great read .. has captured the essence of teenage love blossoming and growing...eager for more!

Jul 07 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Neha!

Jul 27 '14
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anshyul

The book is superbly written... Tears flown through my eyes by seeing ur efforts.. jst kidding..:-P ...No doubt tanaya you are wonderful writer... n m glad by watching ur efforts taken to write this book... KEEP IT UP TANS...!!! SOON u'll be consider as India's best author.. :-)

Jul 07 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Hehe! Thanks, Anshyul!

Jul 27 '14
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parveen nagel

Job Well Done! nice work, eagerly waiting for the full book, cheers!

Jul 07 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Parveen!

Jul 27 '14
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Surabhi Mokashi

Very fresh and witty. It's impossible not to visualise all the vivid characters in your head. Potentially unputdownable book in process!

Jul 07 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Surabhi!

Jul 27 '14
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Jesika Kumbhar

Nice book Tanaya!! Would love to read the book further!!

Jul 06 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Jesika!

Jul 27 '14
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Jul 06 '14
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Jul 06 '14
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Darshan Mhatre

NOSTALGIC !! Although this one is totally different then mine, but the feel remains the same. I never knew you could write so beautifully. Awesome Tanaya ! Already in love with this part of the book. I feel like coming at your place and read the remaining part. But I would be more proud to grab a published hardcopy from store and read the book. :)

Jul 06 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you so very much, Darshan!

Jul 27 '14
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Deepak Patil

I am not much into books. But the title itself is attention grabbing. Great job,Tanaya. It's well written, not following a strict format has actually worked to your advantage. Can't wait to read what happens next- in hard copy format.

Jul 06 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Deepak!

Jul 27 '14
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Shravan X Kale

There are stories which require the reader to process a lot of complexity while this one one banks on the readers common imagination. That's what strikes me as the best thing about this story.

Jul 06 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Shravan!

Jul 27 '14
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Kanchan Pandhare

The story is great,dramatic and engaging. Looking forward to read this book. Hope it will get published soon

Jul 06 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Kanchan!

Jul 27 '14
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Rahul Gavand

Very beautiful story.. Why can't I read it further? Please publish!

Jul 06 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Rahul!

Jul 27 '14
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Rahul Zips

Loved all the characters. Good work Tanaya..Keep it up !! I really want to know what happens next !!

Jul 06 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Rahul!

Jul 27 '14
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Omkar Gavand

Very refreshing story. Want to read more !!

Jul 06 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Omkar!

Jul 27 '14
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Charul Veer

Your book is awesome!!
Totally engages every person who reads it.
You have a long way to go :)
Your book truly has so many reasons to get published.
Even I am inspired to write one ;)
CONGRATULATIONS :D

Jul 06 '14
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Asha Ravindranath

The book is excellently written with clear and precise language.
It has a esay-reading quality and a refreshing story-line.
The flow of words very good and I strongly appreciate it.

Jul 06 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you very much! :)

Jul 27 '14
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Jul 06 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Ratna! :D

Jul 27 '14
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ratna.271292@gmail.com

Tanaya! :) As a staunch supporter of the chick lit genre I can say that you have made us chicks proud :D I like the pace, fluidity and flow of the language and story though I need to read the whole book to understand the plot and characters (hint, hint :P) I can see the influences here (read : Anuja Sharma, and perhaps a bit of Cabot and Kinsella too? :P) Great going Tanaya! Congratulations on a commendable effort and all the very best.

Jul 06 '14
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Akshaya

Simple and realistic story! Tanaya, you have quickly become one of my favorite writers!! :) I loved the simplicity and honesty with which you have given depth to all characters that anyone can easily connect to. Chemistry between two lovers, Strong emotional bond between two best friends who can read each others' minds despite being thousand miles apart, Relationship between two sisters, hysterical yet relatable conversations.. everything is so beautifully written that it just took me to "I want to know more-I want to know more" state with every single line I read..!
and I desperately WANT TO KNOW MORE!!
Please get it published ASAP. I am sure it will be a huge success! Keep up the good work Tanaya :)

Jul 06 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you so very much :D

Jul 27 '14
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chet

great efforts tanaya......great story and great mixture of daily life dialogues......keep it up and waiting for the published book to read the end of the story....:)

Jul 05 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Chet!

Jul 27 '14
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Jul 05 '14
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sachin dalvi

Awesome story tanaya :)

Jul 05 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you! :D

Jul 27 '14
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Vrinda Gupta

It was a treat to read Tanaya. Loved the characters and the story. Eagerly waiting for the next chapters.
Many many congratulations to you.:)
Keep up the good work :D

Jul 05 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Vrinda!

Jul 27 '14
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prajakta

nice work!!! waiting for the hard copy of book!!!!
:)

Jul 05 '14
1
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Prajakta!

Jul 27 '14
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Kamakshee Samant

Amazing story girl!
Awesome love story.looking forward to read the whole book...
All the best!

Jul 05 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Kamakshee!

Jul 27 '14
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kittu

nice work done!!! congrats!!!!!

Jul 05 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Kittu!

Jul 27 '14
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kirti

very AWESOME story!!! fall in love with your KRISH.
BEST OF LUCK!!!!

Jul 05 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Kirti!

Jul 27 '14
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Nihar Mehta

Taut, engaging, heartfelt and refreshingly well-written !

Jul 05 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Nihar!

Jul 27 '14
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Jul 05 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Khushboo!

Jul 27 '14
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Khushboo Madan

wonderful writing!!!!!! Your work will definitely have the reader say"WHAT NEXT??" at each point. Waiting to read further..............

Jul 05 '14
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Tanmay Mokashi

Great stuff. I don't really like romantic books but this is great stuff. Avantika's point of view is really great. The portrayal of all the relationships is top notch! Great job. I found this better than 2 States. It will make a better book if published. Hope you get published and I would love to read more about the characters! Cheers!

Jul 05 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Tanmay!

Jul 27 '14
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kajal

Nice story tanaya..

Jul 05 '14
1
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Kajal!

Jul 27 '14
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Kajal Dalvi

Awesome story. I found myself saying aww, noo.. don't, please, sad etc while reading a book, like it was happening in front of me. Everything at one place. Love, family, friendship, career,ups and downs, happiness.
Can't wait to buy a copy. Good work tanaya :)

Jul 05 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you, Kajal!

Jul 27 '14
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Shadwal Srivastava

A fresh story that keeps you hooked. Would love to read what happens next. Great work :)

Jul 05 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Shadwal!

Jul 27 '14
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Neha Ajay Singh

Kudos to you Tanaya ! I always had like a soft corner for the love stories ! It was indeed a treat to read this one . All the very best to you ! Hope i see this book as a movie too ! would love to see the characters alive

Jul 05 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Neha! :D

Jul 27 '14
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Shrutika Hari

One word: WOWWWW. One more: KRISHHHHHHHHHHHHH :D Soooooo awesomely written Senior! Kept me glued :D Loved the younger sis Shipra ;) PS. Mujhe pura book padhna hai ASAP! Suspense se mar rai hu yaha pe :P

Jul 05 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Haha! Thanks, Shrutika!

Jul 27 '14
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Jul 05 '14
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Akshay Doshi

Good work

Jul 05 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you, Akshay!

Jul 27 '14
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Jayashree Hari

Absolutely amazing writing Tanaya!!
definitely want to read further.
keep it up! and congratulations!

Jul 05 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you, Aunty!

Jul 27 '14
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Jul 05 '14
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Pallavi

its a great piece of writing and awesome love story , eagerly waiting what happen's next..

Jul 05 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Pallavi!

Jul 27 '14
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Jyoti Kaushik

Sincere efforts. I can anticipate that the book will touch the hearts of all ages. The language is very simple and easy to comprehend. Awesome story line.
Indeed it is an applaudable effort. Eagerly waiting for whats going to happen next. Congratulations and good luck

Jul 05 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you, Jyoti!

Jul 27 '14
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Rajani

this script is awesome. great discription of characters and good dialogue writings.
keeps u with the flow of story. So want to read the whole book.

Jul 05 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you!

Jul 27 '14
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aniket sinha

Great going ...looking forward to read the whole book , all the best :)

Jul 05 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Aniket!

Jul 27 '14
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Nitin Nair

awesome story....

Jul 04 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Nitin! :D

Jul 04 '14
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Aniket Sawant

double chance with best selling book u can also make a movie wid this story (Y) keep it up :)

Jul 04 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Haha! Let the book become bestselling first :P
Thanks a lot, Aniket!

Jul 04 '14
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Vinit Dalvi

BEST BOOK

Jul 04 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you :)

Jul 04 '14
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Abhishek Joshi

really nice storyline and it is the time to prove that chetan bhagat is not the only engineer who can be a nice author. Waiting for it to be published

Jul 04 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Haha, Abhishek, it definitely is time!
Thanks a ton :D

Jul 04 '14
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Jul 04 '14
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Alka Patel

A very interesting bold love story a very successful attempt by a teenage author..............The language is appreciable with correct wordings & situations......A very very comprising novel Best Wishes to Tanaya....

Jul 04 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks so much, Alka aunty! :D

Jul 04 '14
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Sangeeta Mokashi

The book is superb with all types of emotions. When I was reading the book, the visuals were right in front of my eyes. I would like to know what happens next and would like this book to be published. Best wishes for your new venture and hope to get your autographed book !!

Jul 04 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks so much, Mumma :* :)

Jul 04 '14
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Tushar Mokashi

Wow, Very nice work, Characters are well developed, giving a real time feeling and you get involved in the story and anxious to know what next?? Eagerly looking forward to read the book.
Bravo, Keep up the good work and looking forward for many more books from you. God Bless and Best Wishes.

Jul 04 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks a lot, Papa! :D :)

Jul 04 '14
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Hardik

Awesome story....

Jul 04 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Hardik!

Jul 04 '14
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Rajashreejana

The story is really very good...and I am eager to know what happens next ...please get it published...

Jul 04 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you so much, Rajashreejana!

Jul 04 '14
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Shomona Mukherjee

The only scale that a reader can measure a book by is the plethora of emotions that it can squeeze out of him/her. My Big Fat Un-Wedding excelling in its simplicity promises not only to make the reader tear up, rejoice, scream, laugh but also taste every possible flavour of human emotion. The manuscript has immense potential, especially with the dramatic handling of characters and events. Drama is essential to any story but in the world of chick-lit, it’s the topping we don’t eat our ice-cream without. This book promises enough drama to relish, devour and feel satiated in the end.

Jul 04 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Shomona!
Thanks so much!
This review is one I'll always cherish! :)

Jul 04 '14
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Gajal Jain

Tanayaaaaaa!!!!!!!! Hats off dude!!!! This piece of writing is just beyond awesome..!!!! It's fresh and beautiful and lively... I dint leave the sight of my comp even for a second while i read it!!! Way to go girl..... All the best and i cant wait to read what happens next!! And Congratulations!! :D

Jul 04 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you so very much, Gajal! :D

Jul 04 '14
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Manjiri Gawand

Awesome story that deals with all aspects of human spirit.. dreams, love, friendship, struggles, humor, suspense.. It has everything! It's one of the finest written stories I have read ever. :) Eagerly waiting for the published copies having Author's signature.. :) :)

Jul 03 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Manjiri :D
Oh, I want to sign your copy just as much :)

Jul 03 '14
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Sharanya Hari

So, before I started reading, I read your description(I mean the description you gave for the book), and now that I think about it, I realize how true it is. Yes, it's writing that keeps you glued, and it's a story-line that leaves you wanting more with every chapter. But it does strike a chord due to its honesty and simplicity. What I loved about the story is that Avantika is not the quintessential girl-next-door, and Krish, not just the cute guy-next-door. Their individuality is striking, and by just reading three parts of the book, I can confidently say that it is essential to the book. But I also love the fact that you've catered to the 21st century audience. Ambition and the need to carve out a niche for yourself in a competitive world, whilst staying true to yourself- It comes through beautifully when Avantika decides to pursue a different field, one that's close to her heart; one that will bring her happiness. As far as Krish goes, I think it's okay to say that I have a massive crush on the guy. :P
The storyline is gripping and there is never a dull moment. A refreshing chick-lit, and God, we do we need these in life! (OH, YEAH,WE DO!) :P
The only disappointment I faced is where the author leaves us hanging. A practice, I assume she's well habituated with. :P
Like, I cannot WAIT to read more. It's like one of those things where you absolutely HAVE TO KNOW what happens next.
Tanaya, great job, really.
I cannot wait to buy a copy someday. :D

Jul 03 '14
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Manjiri Gawand

Hey Sharanya, this is a perfect review! I so wish I could write this well :)
Yes Tanaya, we all have a crush on Krish :P

Jul 03 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you so very much, Sharanya! :D
P.S. Don't we all have a massive crush on Krish? :P

Jul 03 '14
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Jul 03 '14
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Bhushan Patil

Nice start. Some of the scenes are described awesomely. All in all, great effort.

Jul 03 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Bhushan!

Jul 03 '14
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Rohan

lovely story, keeps you binding till the end,,, lovely chemistry between krish nd av till now,, waiting for further thng.. :)

Jul 03 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Rohan!

Jul 03 '14
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darshan lakade

kudos tanaya... aweesome storyline,by awesome writer, cant wait to read full book.. :D

Jul 03 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you, Darshan!

Jul 03 '14
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Sneha Kanekar

Awesome work tanaya!!damn why cant I read it further. eagerly waiting to read ahead and im sure it will be a great success once its out there in the stores. a perfect blend of romance and suspense. the locations, the characters come out so lively. great job!!!

Jul 03 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks a ton, Sneha!

Jul 03 '14
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Komal Kavaiya

good story ..... waiting ahead to read the complete book

Jul 03 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you, Komal!

Jul 03 '14
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Harsh Kadam

Can't wait to read the further part. Publishh ASAP!!

Jul 03 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Hehe! Thankyou, Harsh!

Jul 03 '14
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Anish Kanekar

first of all you have done an excellent job. the storyline is fantabulous. the suspense has been maintained throughout the whole story and that makes keeps you engrossed all the way. I would really love to read the further part and also would like to see it in the stores soon.
ALL THE BEST

Jul 03 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks a lot, Anish! :D

Jul 03 '14
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Onkar Patwardhan

First of all Tanaya, Kudos for taking your passion further by taking serious efforts to write this book. It surely deserves great applause for finding time from the busy engineering schedule for doing what you love, and then writing such a fine piece. The story line is gripping right from the start and all I wanted to know was What Next ? What will happen with Krish and Avantika ? Such is the intensity of the script which kept me hooked. I am not sure but maybe 'Damn it' is more widely used than 'Damnit'; some sentences might do with a bit of rephrasing too. The cover of the book befits the theme well; probably you could jazz it up a bit.But barring the minor nuances, the book is surely a fine piece of art and I am looking forward to picking up the book from Crossword soon ! All the best for this as well as your future endeavors :-)

Jul 03 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks for the review, Onkar!
About the 'Damn it'/'Damnit' mix up, will check it out!
Good to know I have a sure shot copy sold in you. :P
Thanks again!

Jul 03 '14
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Sibu SlipkNot Sahu

As said reading has got its own pleasure , this books holds the reader, an amusing satire looking forward to read more. Keep Writing !

Jul 03 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Sibu!
Definitely will keep writing! :D

Jul 03 '14
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Kedar Patil

Bringing suspense right from the start will not let you keep this book down till the end.The story line is flowing smooth and the language is simple.Looking forward to how things will end.

Jul 03 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you, Kedar! :D

Jul 03 '14
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Prabhakar

good book till here. good story line. would like to read further.

Jul 03 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you! :D

Jul 03 '14
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chetan

Great story, feels just like we are beside Avantika and Krish watching by them their life. Good discription of feelings and situations. Want to read full book. Please publish this book as soon as possible. Want to know what happens next!!!!

Jul 03 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you so much, Chetan! :D

Jul 03 '14
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priyanka mistry

Awsome story. touching and goes with flow. and krish is so awsome :*. feelings arre expressed nicely.

Jul 03 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thank you, Priyanka!
Krish is the best. :D

Jul 03 '14
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Vaibhav Adsul

Story looks interesting and has nice flow. Takes you away with it. It'll be really nice to read it further. I've not completed reading it, but first few pages gave a hint on how great the story will be!!!

Jul 03 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks, Vaibhav! Means a lot. :)

Jul 03 '14
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prasad lakade

first of all congo..mokashi. And now Really dun knoe wat to say, srsly speechless, Thrughout the story, it kept me invloved nd imagining thngs as u have written.. Dats wat a book shud do to a reader..
... Everything was so perfect, ur phrases, interjections, character stories.... they actually kept me binding..
Yup i have read books before of des kind, dey used to be my favs, cuz i started with des genre only..
Nd srsly level of wat u had expressed in ur book was no less than it..
All these 189 pages , till the tym it was completed never felt like keeping it aside..
just awesome work..
i hope your will be in the stores soon , yes nd ofcourse, it will ... i need that hardcopy of ur full book desperately..:D

Jul 03 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi

Thanks a lot, Prasad! :D
I too want a hard copy of my full book. :P

Jul 03 '14
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Tanaya Mokashi Follow

Chick lit crazy. Computer science nerd. Shopaholic to the core. Foodie. Oh, also, when I'm not busy studying or catching up on the latest Suits episode, I'm busy drooling over Maxwell, or eating bad and ridiculously overpriced cheesecake!