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OMG! The 15 minutes I took to read these few chapters, were the best 15 minutes of my life.
This is beyond publishing. Congratulations!
Three stars for the superb editing. To be honest could not surpass chapter 1 as it is too long. Felt like I was reading an essay. In today's publishing industry the story should be gripping from the page 1. All the best, keep writing.
Thanks for your feedback Nikhil. Yes, I do agree that chapter 1 is a bit too long; but if you find the time to read on, you will understand why. Thanks again.
Well done, how can I read the next part?