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This is a superb piece of work.
Well written but I was not expecting grammatical errors which gradually diluted my interest.
It began well but I lost interest in seeing the spelling and grammatical errors.
I liked the theme but it's execution needs further drilling down as the narrative is on a very macro level currently.
It could not keep me engaged. This book, like the earlier one I read today, needs a thorough grammar and spelling check.
The thought behind the book may have been good but this looks like a rough draft. It needs to be checked for grammar and spellings.
Too good, thoroughly enjoyed it. Very interesting, I want to read the full story. Found a good book after a long time.
Good story telling. Different from other stories . Very interesting and required to be published,
Good story telling. Very interesting and different from other stories.Required to be published.