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It's a good effort. There are bits that are truly funny. However, the plot seems to have no direction, if I go by the synopsis. The generous splattering of hindi words also does not make it an easy read. It has potential, but needs rework and editing.
The synopsis, the title and cover piqued my interest, however the execution needs improvement. The book started out slow with lots of descriptions in the passive voice, that made me lose some of my interest. It sounded like a science fiction at first, then began to appear like a comedy. The story slowly had me confused that I couldn't read beyond the middle of Chapter 2. Too many long sentences and dialogues.
Thank you for the review.
Intriguing and well-written, I enjoyed this excerpt. The cover, however, does not fit in with the plot, and maybe the title too could be more specific and reflect the nature of the storyline. Currently, the title does not do full justice to what the reader is about to experience.
Thank u. Shall take care of those aspects. Thank u for the suggestions. :)