Sujit Naray
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The intro 1st chpt and the third one were an exciting read. Second was a bit too long. Do shorten it if you can in places where descriptions can be avoided. Rest, awesome story, superb character and plots.

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Ananthanarayanan V

Thank you for the detailed review, ratings and feedback. Yes, there are many sections / plots and characters which are described with minute details. Some of these are important clues for Rajat in the further chapters of the book. They help him decide 'who are the bad guys' and also 'who can be really trusted?'. But will surely take your feedback into consideration. In case this manuscript is chosen for publishing by BGB, will definitely work on the 'details' part of the book across areas and reduce the "descriptions' in places which do not affect or later the storyline at the later stages. .

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