Sundari Venkatraman
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The Unvanquished

Sundari Venkatraman

Interesting! I like the way the story of Devavrata has been presented as a flashback from Bheeshma's point of view. I can see from the blurb that there will be more stories from many other perspectives. If intricately woven, this book could be turned into a bestseller for sure. All the best Geetha Krishnan. Looking forward to reading more.

Jan 04 '16
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Geetha Krishnan

Thank you ma'am. :)

Jan 04 '16
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Sundari Venkatraman > Vanita Bodke

Hi Vanita, nice to meet you here. Do check out my book "An Autograph For Anjali". It would be great if you can post your honest feedback on the same :D

Dec 14 '15
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Vanita Bodke

Yes will do :)

Dec 15 '15
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Sundari Venkatraman > Debraj Moulick

Thank you Debraj. Could you please review and rate my book on the website? :)

Dec 14 '15
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The Mystery of Bila Land

Sundari Venkatraman

The story started off gripping, making me want to read more. But after a few pages, the convoluted explanations began to drag. The premise is good and the author can definitely spin a story. With the right editor, the story has good scope.

Dec 07 '15
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LIONESS ON TWO FEET

Sundari Venkatraman

Where's the fiction?
It reads like a rant. A suggestion to the writer: Please read a lot of fiction, especially popular ones to get a hang of how a story may be presented. I am not saying that the popular ones should be followed verbatim; but it will give a clue as to what the reader is looking for.

Dec 06 '15
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Sundari Venkatraman > Jazz Singh

Thanks! It would be great if you can post a brief feedback and star rating. IF the book gets great feedback, it may be picked by BGB for publishing as ebook. The process takes about 2-3 months for selection. After that, maybe Westland for paperback... :D

Dec 05 '15
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Thunderclap

Sundari Venkatraman

The language is good and I like the way the author has woven timelines back and forth. The telling of the tale could be woven tighter. Interesting plot! Can definitely be worked on to make a good book. All the best!

Dec 04 '15
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Shantala Nayak

Thanks Sundari, will check it out. :)

Dec 01 '15
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The Legend of Devyani

Sundari Venkatraman

I got pulled into the story. It's beautifully structured. It should make for a wonderful book once polished by an editor. Looking forward to reading the whole book as soon as it gets published. Congratulations to the author!

Dec 01 '15
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Varchaswi

Thanks a lot Mrs Sundari Venkatraman, for your time and your review....Means a lot to me.... :)

Dec 05 '15
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One Beautiful Life

Sundari Venkatraman

Dec 01 '15
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Sundari Venkatraman

I was intrigued by the synopsis. This book sounds quite different from usual. I was curious to read more. But I wish the author had "shown" the scenes unfold instead of narrating everything. It's like listening to someone tell a story instead of it all happening out there. Needs a lot of re-working.

Dec 01 '15
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Rashmi Rathi

Thanks for sparing time to read and giving feedback!

Dec 01 '15
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Life's Status: it's Complicated!!!

Sundari Venkatraman

It's nothing new; the usual story of young love. The author can improve her writing skills with a lot of practice and then will have a better manuscript is all I can say.

Dec 01 '15
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I want to run away

Sundari Venkatraman

Deepa Iyyer has a very good story to tell. Her writing style is fluid with touches of humour. I can visualise the scene as I read.
What I would like to see more is the scenes unfolding in description and dialogue rather than narration. That would add more value to this work. The book is worth publishing under the guidance of a good editor

Nov 26 '15
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