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About vidhya devaraj

A senior content writer by profession, I am on the brink of becoming a successful crime fiction writer. Hoping my dream would come true one day!!!

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vidhya devaraj

Hi,
A very interesting plot!
I liked your simple language and writing style. A completely different story that piqued my interest.
keep up the good work!

Feb 12 '15
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Gaurav Bist

Appreciate you taking time to read this. Have a cracking w'kend, love

Feb 13 '15
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vidhya devaraj

Hi,
Like other fellow reviewers, I too got the thought that the chapters were too small. These 3 chapters could have been clubbed to a single chapter.
And, since we got to know very less about the murder, the suspense factor is missing.
Try to add some more suspense elements which will make us yearn for more.

Feb 12 '15
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vidhya devaraj

Hi Murali,
Reading your novel was like watching a movie for me. An excellent plot, a fast paced narrative and the solid character -Virat are sure to make all readers gripped to your book and yearn for more.

All the best!
Hoping to see your book in print soon!!

Sep 04 '14
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N. Murali

Thanks so much for your kind words. I will be sending you a free copy when the book comes out. :)

Sep 11 '14
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vidhya devaraj

Hi,
I liked your narrative and the plot. But, I felt it would have been even more interesting if you had introduced the murder in the initial chapters of your novel.

Sep 04 '14
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vidhya devaraj

Hi Uday!!!
I really liked the plot and your fast-paced narrative. The language and writing style are too good. I am a thriller lover and your novel has indeed piqued my interest.
I only have one suggestion. You have used too many adverbs ('ly' words) which is considered bad writing in the fiction writing industry. As a budding thriller writer, I know its pretty hard to avoid the use of adverbs. I have completed only 4 chapters and tried to bypass as many adverbs as possible. So, please prevent using them and you may reach great heights.
Apart from that I loved your book a lot. I really wish to see your book in print. All the very best!!!

Sep 03 '14
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vidhya devaraj

That's great! All the best!!!

Sep 10 '14
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Uday Satpathy

Thank you Vidhya for your kind words and suggestions. I have already edited the manuscript a couple of times after it appeared on BGB. Hopefully it will live up to your expectations.

Sep 10 '14
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vidhya devaraj

I personally liked all the three stories. what amazed me is that you have a very good writing style as that of famous writers. keep up the good work!!!

Aug 24 '14
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