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Very nice and fun to read.
Excellent storyline and writing style, but rather stretchy and slow pace. Tone down the descriptive narrations and it will be in sync with crime fiction.
@Vihant I have re-submitted my New Manuscript based on all of Your FEEDBACK So please do have a look and Share your NEW RATINGS & Reviews - "A case to begin all cases" - http://bloodygoodbook.com/ereader2.0/?id=52
Thank you all for your valuable feedback. I have made changes to my copy of the manuscript by editing out lengthy descriptions, except in those plot areas which require the same. For Eg. A Detailed description of a bag or an accessory of a character might be a clue to the main character in unraveling a mystery. Looking forward to sharing the new edited version some day with all of you soon. Have a wonderful week ahead. RegardsAnanth V (Life has a way of balancing itself)