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The author has selected a storyline that appeals to all. He has also seems to have considered underlying emotions, which is very good. As far as the narration is concerned, it went off-track at some places. But, the author was quick to get the tempo back. Honestly, I feel that this story has all the elements that make it an interesting and worthy read.
Thanks Bhaiyya. The thing I love about your review is your honesty without bias of personal relation. It counts a lot and has heavier weight-age in assessing the chance of being published.