Varun Prabhu
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About Varun Prabhu

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Bangalore

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vvprabhu07@gmail.com

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Favourite Books

Lord of the Rings

A Song of Ice and Fire

Kingkiller Chronicles

Wheel of Time

Malazan Book of the Fallen

Domechild

Favourite Authors

J R R Tolkien

G R R Martin

Brandon Sanderson

Robert Jordan

Patrick Rothfuss

Favourite Genres

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Varun Prabhu

A lot of tell and less of show. Even though I attest that show vs tell is a hyped concept, I look for a balance. This manuscript needs a second look. However, the story seems interesting. Keep on writing. The prose is good.

Oct 18 '15
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Rashmi Rathi

Thanks Varun for sparing time to read the book and the feedback!

Oct 28 '15
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Karna's Alter Ego

Varun Prabhu

The story is great. The first chapter was a little tedious to read, what with the longish paragraphs and all, but the next two chapters were interesting. Some proofreading and editing will make this book something to look out for.

Oct 08 '15
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One Eye On The Darkness

Varun Prabhu

This is an excellent way to write a suspense thriller. The author has started off wonderfully and the writing style hooks the reader right in. I wish the author good luck :D

Oct 08 '15
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Varun Prabhu

Excellent start. I would leave to read further. And now that it is published, I am going to buy it soon :D :)

Oct 08 '15
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Thunderclap

Varun Prabhu

Writing style and narration failed to capture my attention. The manuscript does need to be proofread. The execution could be better. Yes, there are some positives like good buildup and visualization, but should it get published at this stage? No.

Oct 08 '15
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